This is also on http://blog.elanco.org/ly361/2017/04/25/high-school-reality-part-2/ And http://blog.elanco.org/mansi681/2017/04/25/high-school-reality-part-2/
Go check out part 1! http://blog.elanco.org/groff67c/2017/04/11/high-school-reality-part-1/
All the photos gotten from Pixabay! Go check them out here! https://pixabay.com/
Hello again,
I hope you had a good week. I hope you had a great ‘blogging’ week. Just to check are you prepared for the commenting game that will be coming up as part of the Student Challenge in a couple of weeks?
1. Have you at least 5 other student blogs linked on the sidebar of your blog; blogs from other students around the world, not just those in your class or school. Good I can see you have done this.
2. Do you have a blogroll or link category called Global students or Global classes. I put a link about how to do this in my previous message. I see you have done this too.
So Ms. Wyatt’s essentials in a great post are below. I have added whether I think you have achieved this in your most recent post. I enjoyed the cliff hanger and your use of Google slides.
1. A catchy title – Yes!
2. At least one visual (with attribution) whether photo, cartoon, video or another web 2.0 tool like padlet or glogster – Have you an attribution for the picture of the mansion?
3. An interesting topic with your passion for the subject coming through – Yes
4. A post that is well written and not copy/pasted from somewhere else – Certainly this is original.
5. A post has been proofread and spellchecked – Just a question mark missing.
6. One that is written in paragraphs – at least three of them – divided up on the Google slides so that is fine.
7. One that includes links to other websites on similar topics – at least two of these
Hmm…I’m not sure how you would do this … or if you would need to…Perhaps a link to Part 1 of this …and the original inspiration for this work.
So you have achieved 5.9 out of 7. Ms.Wyatt says that if your post covers the seven things mentioned above e.g. has a catchy title, includes at least one visual etc. etc., it will be added to the flipboard magazine.
Could you make any changes so that it would score 7 out of 7? By this I mean adding the question mark and the link(s)
When you have done that, Ms. Wyatt suggests you go to the blogging challenge and leave a comment on this post.
Here is the link to the post she is talking about: http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/04/23/week-6-what-to-write-about/
Just to remind you she asks that you ‘mention what topic you wrote about and leave a link to your post’….not a link to your blog but to the post.
I would also make clear that this post is not ‘other homework’ but a response to the Student Blogging Challenge by adding the hashtag
#stubc17 Week 6 to the title.
Hope you find this helpful. With every good wish
Merry Beau
Thank you so much I’m doing this with Milani I will put her blog link down below! Thank you!
Oops I have just visited Milani’s blog and see that she has the same High School Reality slideshow … so is it a summary of a book you are reading? It must be homework then? Perhaps? So not completely original then. I admit to being a bit confused. Not to worry anyhow. Have a good week.
Nope not homework a book that I just like. Yeah not completly oringinal but me and her are working on it together.
Thanks for your replies.
I hope you enjoy Games Week on the Student Blogging Challenge. https://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/05/07/week-8-games-and-more-games/
Week 8! Just two more challenge weeks after this.
Don’t forget to reply to the comments your visitors leave.
With every good wish
Merry Beau
Thanks! Again Sorry I haven’t posted in a while just finished PSSA’s Sorry!
I am really looking forward to what to write for this week’s challenge;
The 9th week of the Student Blogging Challenge
Write the very best post you can for your teachers and visitors to read.
You can read more about what Ms.Wyatt wants you to do here:
http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/05/14/week-9-have-i-improved/
Good luck 🙂
Thanks! I have a question do you like the High school reality series? If so why? I want to get peoples’ opinion on what I need to improve on or what they like! THANKS! ?
Hi Brooklynn,
I think it is clever and that the subject matter is what students your age are interested in. I like that it is illustrated and that it ends on a cliff hanger every episode.
Keep up the good work.
With every good wish
Merry Beau
Thank you so much! I MIGHT write a story about a game that we play in math! It’s called 24! I’m in the tournament for PA and I will be doing it with Jackson from http://blog.elanco.org/custer547/ and Summer from http://blog.elanco.org/stern338/ is going to the tournament also! BYE!
As the Student Blogging Challenge ends, goodbye from me in Ireland and the best of luck to you in the future,
With every good wish,
Merry Beau