The Fox Cinquain
November 1, 2016
The Fox
#STUBC16
fox
slick and sly
hunting, hiding and running
always playing with their friends
Ashlyn
(image from compfight)
The Fox
#STUBC16
fox
slick and sly
hunting, hiding and running
always playing with their friends
Ashlyn
(image from compfight)
Hi Ashlyn I’m Elijah, I really like the way you made your poem the Cinquain poem method, and how it sounds is good as well. And I wish you could of put more commas because there were some places where you didn’t out commas. And I don’t really have a wonder. But you do have a good poem, I’m just not that good at making stars, wishes, and I always use it. Visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/zookpe9/
Hi ash.will you please come to my blog.your BFF lily.?bye
Hi Elijah. I am happy that you commented!! I did not really know where to put the commas, and I will definitely visit your blog! From: Ashlyn.