October 5

The Message


This concept is based on a daughter and a dad messaging together.      By: Josh and Jace

Daughter’s            Dad’s

     side                   side




I feel weird.

idk why though.  


Why has mom not been

at our house for awhile?            “Problems Honey.”



                                                               Me and mom have

                                                               Have been getting                                  

                                                                In fights.




There is a girl watching me

But she does not see.

                                                           Stay calm!

I Don’t see her



OMG She’s

Banging on

The door!                                                             

                                                                   Dont answer.

I know.


Someone just texted


                                                                      Dont answer

                                                                     Whatever you



                                                                     Because i know

                                                                       Who this is




Why can’t you

Tell me?                       

                                                                     None of your


Whatever, i’m shaking.

The girl keeps texting me!                        



You know what i am, because

You’re doing nothing.


                               THE RANDOM GIRL




                                                                         I know what

                                                                         What you



                                                                       Pugs are Your

                                                                         Favorite dog.

How did you know


                                                               I know all about



                                                                    I like taylor

                                                                     Swift too.



Stop talking to me!

                                                                           I’M Coming!


                                                               In your house!


Please don’t.                       

                                                           Just to hang out.

Im calling the

Cops right now

They said they will

Be here in 5 minutes.

                                                                 I have 5 minutes

                                                                    To hang out

                                                                       With you

                                                                     Let’s play hide

                                                                     And seek!

OK your not coming in.                  


                                                               I know your

                                                               Favorite spot!                           

 Then i will go

Somewhere else.                                 i know were you

                                                                  Are gonna go.

We’re not going to play.

                                                                      You’re funny!




                                                                     I’m coming!




Hey i’m back!


Not really she’s about

To come in.

                                                                   I left work i’m


I still wonder about


                                                             We have to

                                                          worry about this.


                                                        What did she say?

She knows all

About me.


How do you


                                                         I have to tell you.


                                                                  The girl your

                                                               Wondering about

                                                                Is your mom.



                                                           Ever since we broke

                                                          Up she wanted you

                                                           Not in a good way.



She is screaming and

Trying to knock the

Door down!!!


                                                                       Hide, now.

She knows my spot.

                                                            Don’t hide there



                                                      Just hide until the

                                                        Cops come.

They should come any



I’m hiding in where

We store our food

Up on the top shelf.


   She is ringing the

Doorbell & yelling to

Come in.


OMG she just bust

In. I am about

To throw up.                                                 Stay calm

                                                                       Whatever you


She just went down

Stairs where my spot is.


She is tearing everything

Down and crying & screaming.

         You there?   


She is in the kitchen right

Now she is breaking everything.


   She’s coming in!!!!

She doesn’t see me,

She walked in looked

up at me

But did

not see me.


Should i get off of the shelves 

                                                             I don’t know

  I think she’s outside                

I’m jumping down



   I jumped


    Oh nooooooo! she

Is right there, she got

      me cornered!!


      I’m in this small

         Area it’s pitch



          I’m in a car,

           “Mom’s car.”

                                                                     Do you know                     

                                                                        Where she is

                                                                            Taking you?  



                                                                            Look outside

                                                                            The window.

I Can’t im in

The back.

                                                                          Is it locked?

I don’t know.

                                                                    Mom forgets to

                                                                            Lock things.

OMG it’s unlocked!

I’m jumping out!                                           Don’t make

                                                                              It obvious





Ok, I’m out.

I don’t think

She noticed.                                                     Good.


Wait… I think she

Is stopping.


                                                                     To Be Continued…

September 18

Meeting Derek Carr

Meeting Derek Carr

By: Owen U

Once upon a time I had a dream where I always wanted to meet Derek Carr. He’s a NFL quarterback for the Oakland Raiders. He’s my favorite player on the team other than Khalil Mack. But Derek Carr was one of the best quarterback last year, we made it to the playoffs but the game right before the playoffs he broke his leg, since he couldn’t play the rest of the season we lost the first game of the playoffs against the Houston Texans.


While I was watching one of the Raiders game out of nowhere comes my dad and DEREK CARR just walking in my room! I was like “Is that Derek Carr” I couldn’t believe it, Derek Carr was in my room! After were all done meeting each other out of nowhere my dad says “Do you want to go with me and him to Oakland and meet the other Raiders player” I actually fainted. I couldn’t believe it, I was going to meet the whole Raiders team!


We finished packing and we went to the airport and we took the plane that went to Oakland Alameda Coliseum, that’s where the Oakland Raiders play there games.


We finally landed there and I was so excited to meet the Raiders players. It took a while to drive there because we landed at the nearest airport but it still took 2 hours to get there. When I was sleeping my dad woke me up by saying that “we’re here”. I was nervous at first but when I finally got to meet them I was like they were brothers to me. The one day I got to practice with them, it was one of the best practices ever. The footballs they play with is huge! I had to throw it with both of my hands. But sadly the day was over. But they had a game tomorrow and was going to be on the sidelines with them!  


It was a sunday, gameday. We were facing the Washington Redskins.  We all knew that it would be a really good game because they would be a good competition. Start of the 1st quarter, KICKOFF. We were kicking off to them. They only got to the 15 yard line. We stop them and the Redskins punted it off and everyone got their hopes up because Jalen Richard had open field but didn’t run to the open field and he got tackled and only got to the 45 yard line and could have scored a touchdown. Are line up is good we have good lineman, good wide receivers and a good quarterback. We have a good team.


While Derek Carr and his team was playing I was talking to Khalil Mack on the sidelines. While we were talking All we hear is TOUCHDOWN RAIDERS! Everyone went crazy. I all wanted to know is who scored the touchdown. So the special teams went on and I asked Derek Carr who scored and he said “Seth Roberts did”. I replied “Nice”. So the score is 7 – 0 were winning as we go to the 3rd quarter. We receive the ball this time because we kicked off to them the first quarter.


As the time went by the game ended and the Raiders have lost 21-14. So me and my dad went back to the hotel and packed our stuff and said goodbye to the Raiders and left. We would of stayed longer if the Raiders would of won.


So we got back to Pennsylvania and finish to unpack. Because we got back so late we went right to bed.


        The End

May 25

See Ya Blog Challenge, Till Next Year Week 10 Blog Challenge

I have 52 post in total, and have 29 of those are school based post. I have 66 comments in total but the most comments on a post is my Stephen Curry biography because I think that Steph Curry is really famous and he is like by 75% of the world. I like writing the Unlucky Fortune because it’s with 3 of my friends and it is fun to write. Check out my friends blogs at Luke’s Blog, Jackson’s Blog, and Connor’s Blog. I didn’t change my blog theme at all because I liked the background and it just fit me. I have 17 widgets and I think that it is too many because some of the widgets I don’t even need for my blog. But I think they look cool so that’s why I keep them. I have 277 oversea visitors and most of them are from USA. I have 8 web tools and I used google slides, powtoon, toondoo and powerpoint. Well that’s all and I hope to be in the student blog challenge next year, BYE!!!

May 18

Thank You!!

Thank you you guys for 200 visitors from the USA, and visiting my blog. For the other people out there that’s from a different country get me to 100 visitors from where ever you are. My goal now is to get 300 visitors from USA, well goodbye now and thank you very much and enjoy the rest of your day.

May 17

Unlucky Fortune Part 5


If you haven’t read part 1,2,3 or 4 please do so before reading this or you will be very confused.

“ Owen and Connor, we totally forgot about school.” said Ashton “Well looks like we’re not going to graduate.” I said. “ Dude we’re in 4th grade. This doesn’t affect our graduation.” Jackson said in reply. “ We do need to get back to school though. We can’t tell my Dad until this nonsense is over. So we’re gonna live in an R.V and if anyone asks where we will be then tell them we were on vacation. Ok?” “Ok.” replied everyone.


So after our train ride home we went to school the next day and everyone hammered us with questions. We had a sub teacher and I thought she looked familiar but Connor and Owen thought they didn’t look familiar so I just let it go. About 2 hours past when I realized that someone was staring at me. Then Connor came up to me and he said “ I do think that teacher looks familiar, the student teacher looks familiar too.” “I just realized something, Izabella is disguised as the teacher and Olivia is the student teacher.” replied Jackson. “I see now. It makes a lot more sense. But what do we do now? Make a break for it at recess?” Later that day Jackson, Connor, Owen, and Ashton were out at recess.  “I guess it’s now or never” said Connor.


“NO!” I yelled. “We need proof first.” “Why?” said Ashton. “ Because if we just run off people will come for us.” I replied. As the whistle blew we went into lunch.I told Ashton, Connor and Owen to wait outside in the hallway incase anything happens. The sub teacher let everyone into lunch except for me. That’s when I knew the sub was Izabell. “You know who I am Jackson”.  Then she threw a chair at me and I got a cut from the side of my nose to the bottom of my ear. I yelled and told them to come in quick, and to drag me to the nurse. On the way there I told them that I thought I broke my leg. As I got to the nurse’s office we told them that I got a chair thrown at me by the Sub teacher and she gave me an ice pack and said “Here have an ice pack, and next time you are going to get a chair thrown at you make sure to grab an ice pack first. ”“ I will definitely do that next time ma’am.” I replied sarcastically,.


“Is it just me or do the nurses even care about what happened or do they just give you an ice pack?” said Ashton “ Probably the first one” replied Connor “I have a problem” said Owen. “Here’s an ice pack.” replied the nurses.  As a ice pack came down the hallway and hit Owen in the back of the head. He said  “My problem is now solved.” As he picked himself up from the ground. “She didn’t even know my problem.”


That’s when I told them that the sub teacher was definitely Izabella and the student teacher is Olivia So I went down to the recess doors and I gathered everyone there. I said let’s make a run for it. As soon as we opened the doors I fell and said “My leg hurts too much to run. Someone needs to carry me to the Emergency Room across the street.” Was that ice pack not enough for you?”  replied Ashton. “Very funny.” I said snapped back. So when we were halfway there you could hear the recess doors slam again. It was Isabella and Olivia. You could even see the rest of our class peaking around the corner of the wall.


At that very moment I chose to suck up the pain and I yelled to everyone “ Put me down we are all gonna run!” As we bolted across the street to get to the Emergency Room you could hear the stampede like sound of Isabella and Olivia trailing behind us. “Connor and Jackson, you two make a break for it and me and Owen will hold them off.” said Ashton with a whole lot of anxiety. As they stalled Izabella and Olivia we made it to the Emergency Room. My nurse did a great job and she gave me a cast. I limped home and on the way there I ran into Izabella she told me these words “I have your friends, if you ever want to see them again come to my house.”


Connor tackled Izabella and got her phone. He called Olivia and in a low voice he said “ I have Jackson’s fortune so you can let his friends go.” “Why” replied Olivia? “Because…”


To Be Continued…

May 17

The Legend About Light and Dark


By: Owen

One day a long time ago there was light and dark and they were separated from each side of the earth, but one day they came to each others side to take over each other’s side, so there they were fighting, the Light and Dark to see if there is 24 hours of dark or light or 8 hours of dark and light. And out of nowhere the sky starts talking “ Guys stop fighting! We are going to have a competition to see if there will be more light or dark.” So they both agreed and they were suppose to be here tomorrow at 8:30 sharp.


The next day came and they were ready to do this competition. So the sky spoke and said  there challenge “ The challenge is to create a symbol and make it useful in the world, on your marks get set go!” So the light created this painting called the sun, the dark created the painting called the moon. So then they came to life and the sun and the moon said, “Thank you for letting us out and it was all a trick and the sky helped us out.” So the light and the dark were so frustrated with the sky that they teamed up and took on the sky and sun, “But what about the moon” exclaimed sun. “I’m on the light and dark side” Said the moon.


So the moon and the sun fought with their powers that would send them far far away into the space. A couple days later they were still fighting and then the moon reached the top. He was gonna use his special power that sent them to another galaxy, so the moon used it on the sun and the sky and the moon opened the portal to the other galaxy and sucked the sun and sky right in but before they were sucked in the sun said “ I’ll get you three some day.” The moon use his last two powers to turn the light into the Sun and the Dark into the Moon. So he used it and the became the sun and the moon. Then the moon said “ Sun you will get 24 hours of day and Moon you will get 8 hours of night, then he randomly disappeared


                 2 Years later…


“I’m Baaack” the sun said

                          THE END!

May 16

Unlucky Fortune Part 4


If you haven’t read 1,2,or 3 then read them now or else you’ll be very confused.


  “Connor get Owen and come over to my hotel now. No questions asked.” So as Connor and Owen arrived, we started discussing what we were going to do about Isabella and Olivia. We decided that first we had to stick together.“Wait, Jackson can’t we just tell your dad about the situation.” suggested Owen. “Oh yeah, let’s tell my dad that we were paranormal hunters and were being chased by a crazy lady and we almost died. He’s going to believe us 100%.” I said sarcastically. “So what will we do!?!” exclaimed Connor.



As soon as Connor mentioned that nobody knew what to do. A split second later a cop pulled up right in front of us. “Have any of you seen these two girls?” He said in a very deep voice. Sure enough it was a picture of Isabella and Olivia. I answered “We didn’t see them lately but we were the kids that helped you guys arrest Izabell.” I also quoted “She said that Olivia and I will come back for you Owen, Connor, Ben and Ashton.” The cop responded and said “If they actually do come back for you, the first thing you should do is call us. “Got it” Owen replied. “What should we do Jackson.” Connor asked. Jackson replied “Go find Olivia and Isabella.” “How?” Owen said. “We go to where their last sighting was and we go there because they couldn’t have gotten too far, everyone agree.” Jackson replied. Everyone agreed but right after that they heard a scream, so they went to check it out.


They asked what happened and the girl said “I saw two girls and they looked like this.” She pulled a picture of them she took on her phone, it was a picture of Isabella and Olivia. So we asked which way they went and she gave us directions. We went the way she told us to, and we tried to sneak up on her. Sure enough they were standing there and Izabella said “ I told you we would meet again. I still want your fortune Jackson, and I won’t stop chasing you until I get it.” “ I would love to keep this splendid chat going, but I am going to use the restroom.” replied Jackson.


I had my phone on me, so I called the cops and told them where we were. They came immediately. Somehow they managed to escape. During her escape she said “ I still want you and your fortune.”


To Be Continued…