September 26, 2016
Dear Niagara,
You won’t believe what just happened to me today! I disobeyed father today.
First,I was looking for something to lasso like I like to do.It’s normal for me.Then,I saw a well and I lost my hat because I hit it!I found this horned toad thing and he asked “what’s the matter? I answered saying I lost my brand new hat my pa gave me in that dumb ol well.Don’t you worry senorita I’ll go get it for in exchange for giving me some chili playing your guitar for me and letting me sleep in your hat.No way lizard,I said.Fine no sombrero for you.Fine just get it please!”,I shouted annoyed.Good choice.He is so annoying the only thing I could say is. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!Then we went to my house.He smelled my one and only famous chilli.You’re not gett’n any of that chilli bucko.I said I was annoyed.Then I slammed the door in his face,but before I did that I asked him what his name is.He said his name is Maxmillian weird.I’ll just say max haha.It was funny because he said wait up haha run faster Max. But then I heard this knock at my door I said nooo.I didn’t answer,but then father walked in and opened the door.I tried to stop him but well you know him.he said come on in.Max said,“Your daughter had a deal with me,and she broke it.”.Then dad said that a deal’s a deal bla bla bla.so Max ate some of my chili, I played my guitar, and then he got tired and wanted to sleep in my hat.No way he’s slepping in my hat!But then he reminded me about dad, and I flipped him in my hat.Then he asked me for a KISS!Blahhhhhh.I would not want to kiss him to save my life.and he said he’ll be on his way pronto.I said,“Fine I’ll kiss you.”.Then I kissed him.And a weird whisp looking thing came and turned him into a cat mixed with a lizard looking thing.?.Then I said,“Don’t leave.”.He left anyway and it has been a day and I haven’t seen him again since.
Sincerely,
Reba Jo.
Who is Niagara? I know it is a brand of water. From, Ashlyn
I just made up Niagara.I didn’t mean it to be a brand of water it was a pretty name.Keep commenting.
Also I think you forgot the things where they go when there is the things like, “Hi.” See those things at the end? That is what I am talking about and also I think you a little bit forgot the capital letters and also did you like Prince Maximillian? I know the reading street book said, “And standing there was a handsome young prince.”
From, Ashlyn