October 16

Fall Writing Sample 15-16 The Grand Visit

 

The Grand Visit     

 One day I was at my house and I received a message on my g-mail it said,”    Dear,Elijah could you please come over to my house the last time you came was 7 months ago could you please come today.” Sincerely,Maxwell so then on that same day at 5 o’clock I went over to Max’s house. But it looked different than how it looked 7 months ago. The house had a treehouse connected to it, and it looked like a cottage instead of a house. But I said,”Oh well it’s time to knock on the door.” Than when the door opened I saw tons of animals, and delicious food, and the furniture looked nice and cleaned. And I asked Max,”Did you finally afford those renovations?” Max said,”No!” said Max he said that a wizard came over to his house 2 months ago and he granted him 5 wishes first wish to have an awesome treehouse, second wish he asked to always have good and delicious food, third wish to have good furniture, fourth wish to have nice, and furry, and playful animals,last wish to not have to pay for channels on TV or have to pay the electric bill. Than he said,”Let’s come inside.” So I stayed at his house for a sleepover.                 

We watched TV and had popcorn and, chicken noodle soup separate from the popcorn.   And best of all he had caramel popcorn and some buttered popcorn. We were having a good time until we heard weird noises at first we thought it was just the show, but then we realized it was a weird sounding knock on the door. We opened the door and saw the wizard! He said he was going to take away the wishes  so he was going to take away the wishes. But he gave us three riddles if we got them correct we would get too keep the wishes and have one more wish but if we got them wrong, he would take away our wishes and make Max poor. So the first riddle wa s what is deeper than the sea and and higher than the universe? We responded saying the word nothing the wizard said we are correct. The second riddle was what is wider than the ocean and faster than lightning? We responded saying the word nothing. And the wizard said we are correct. And the final riddle is what is scarier than extinction but as cute as bunnies? Nothing we said. And he said we are correct. So then he gave us one last wish and Max said,”I wish you would LEAVE US IN PEACE AND STAY AWAY FOREVER! Than at the speed of a blink the wizard went away. And I was happy and so was Max and I said,”That was the easiest three riddles I ever did, the wizard is bad at making good and difficult riddles. Than I left in the morning the next day and I said to myself,” I wonder what the next adventure at his house will be maybe it may be that treehouse he has there. I may never know.”

 


Posted October 16, 2015 by zookpe9 in category Uncategorized

3 thoughts on “Fall Writing Sample 15-16 The Grand Visit

  1. infantewl5

    Great story you put some great topics like before and after.I wish the wizard could grant you a wish too.I wonder why the wizard gave Max five wishes.

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    1. zookpe9 (Post author)

      The wizard gave five wishes because I din’t mention this in the story but, the wizard was trapped in a random bottle that was super hard to open. And the wizard said anyone who opened the bottle and saved him would get five wishes of whatever they wanted. And Max opened the bottle. And saved the wizard. And the wizard came to Max in a package.

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