Who I Nominated
I would like to Nominate Ryan’s blog for his great work and excellent writing. He has lots of great writing for people to enjoy! It is all about Jesus. And I Believe in Jesus
Reasons why I voted for his blog:
- He doesn’t go crazy with widgets like other people. Some people have so many widgets all their blog is is widgets.
- He has lots of stories he doesn’t have 1 or 2 pieces of writing. A lot of blogs don’t have many pieces of writing so people don’t visit their blog.
- He doesn’t have a lot of mistakes he might have a little mistakes but not many.
Here is the rank for each of the 6 traits of writing for his blog Here is the URL http://ryancastellobible.edublogs.org/ come and visit it.
4 3 2 1 0
|Ideas||There is 1 clear well-focused topic. Main Idea stands out and is supported by detailed info.||Main Idea is clear but the supporting info is general||Main idea is somewhat clear but there is a need for more supporting info||The main idea is not clear but there is a seemingly random collection of information||Ideas do not answer question|
All sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the-
Ear when read aloud Each sentence is clear and obvious emphasis
Almost all sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the-
Ear when read aloud but 1 or 2 are awkward or difficult to understand
|Most sentences sound natural and are easy- on-the-ear when read aloud, but several are awkward or difficult to understand||The sentences are difficult to read aloud because they sound awkward, are distractingly repetitive, or difficult to understand.||First Draft Quality|
|Word choice||4 (or more) strong descriptive words used correctly||At least 3 strong descriptive words used correctly||At least 2 strong descriptive words used correctly||At least 1 strong descriptive word used correctly||Missing strong descriptive words or not used correctly|
|Conventions||No Errors spelling, grammar, punctuation, caps, and paragraphs||Very few errors: spelling, grammar, Punctuation, caps and Paragraph||Some errors spelling, grammar, Punctuation, caps, and paragraphs||
Spelling, grammar, Punctuation, caps and paragraph.
|Rough Draft quality|
|organization||Main idea 4 supporting details Conclusion||Main idea, 3 supporting details||Main idea, 2 supporting details||Main Idea 1 supporting detail||Missing Main Idea and/or Supporting Detail|
|Voice||Very strong convincing Writer’s voice heard, Passion, Wit, humor, unique||Strong, Convincing writer’s voice heard, Passion, Wit, Humor, unique||Is Convincing Writer’s voice, heard, Passion, Wit, Humor, unique||Mildly Convincing Writer’s voice heard, Passion, Wit, Humor, unique||Rough Draft quality|
Ideas: 3 Sentence Fluency:4 Word Choice: 3 Conventions: 4 Organization: 3 Voice: 3 Total:20
This is why I voted for Ryan’s blog.