Who I Nominated
I would like to Nominate Ryan’s blog for his great work and excellent writing. He has lots of great writing for people to enjoy! It is all about Jesus. And I Believe in Jesus
Reasons why I voted for his blog:
- He doesn’t go crazy with widgets like other people. Some people have so many widgets all their blog is is widgets.
- He has lots of stories he doesn’t have 1 or 2 pieces of writing. A lot of blogs don’t have many pieces of writing so people don’t visit their blog.
- He doesn’t have a lot of mistakes he might have a little mistakes but not many.
Here is the rank for each of the 6 traits of writing for his blog Here is the URL http://ryancastellobible.edublogs.org/ come and visit it.
4 3 2 1 0
| Ideas | There is 1 clear well-focused topic. Main Idea stands out and is supported by detailed info. | Main Idea is clear but the supporting info is general | Main idea is somewhat clear but there is a need for more supporting info | The main idea is not clear but there is a seemingly random collection of information | Ideas do not answer question |
| Sentence Fluency |
All sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the- Ear when read aloud Each sentence is clear and obvious emphasis |
Almost all sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the- Ear when read aloud but 1 or 2 are awkward or difficult to understand |
Most sentences sound natural and are easy- on-the-ear when read aloud, but several are awkward or difficult to understand | The sentences are difficult to read aloud because they sound awkward, are distractingly repetitive, or difficult to understand. | First Draft Quality |
| Word choice | 4 (or more) strong descriptive words used correctly | At least 3 strong descriptive words used correctly | At least 2 strong descriptive words used correctly | At least 1 strong descriptive word used correctly | Missing strong descriptive words or not used correctly |
| Conventions | No Errors spelling, grammar, punctuation, caps, and paragraphs | Very few errors: spelling, grammar, Punctuation, caps and Paragraph | Some errors spelling, grammar, Punctuation, caps, and paragraphs |
Many errors Spelling, grammar, Punctuation, caps and paragraph. |
Rough Draft quality |
| organization | Main idea 4 supporting details Conclusion | Main idea, 3 supporting details | Main idea, 2 supporting details | Main Idea 1 supporting detail | Missing Main Idea and/or Supporting Detail |
| Voice | Very strong convincing Writer’s voice heard, Passion, Wit, humor, unique | Strong, Convincing writer’s voice heard, Passion, Wit, Humor, unique | Is Convincing Writer’s voice, heard, Passion, Wit, Humor, unique | Mildly Convincing Writer’s voice heard, Passion, Wit, Humor, unique | Rough Draft quality |
Ideas: 3 Sentence Fluency:4 Word Choice: 3 Conventions: 4 Organization: 3 Voice: 3 Total:20
This is why I voted for Ryan’s blog.
Hi Ryder I like your writing but you had a error on the first reason why his blog was the best, *cough cough (Opinion) cough* I like how you added the six traits of writing, I wonder why you did add the six traits of writing, Come check out my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/usner407/
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-Owen
I did the 6 traits of writing to show how good his blog is. Thanks!