The Visit

The Visit

One day a little girl named Kaylie was walking down a path to her friend Anthony’s house.Kaylie knocked on Anthony’s door.

Anthony said,“Hello, Oh hi Kaylie.”

“Hi,can you play today?”questioned Kaylie.

“Yes,come right into my house,” said Anthony joyfully.

Kaylie walked in the door and looked in his house.

“Ok,what do you want to do now?”announced Anthony.

Kaylie said, “How about watch a movie?”

“That sounds great,”screamed Anthony with a smile on his face.

So Kaylie sat down and Anthony put the movie in.

“What movie are we watching?” asked Kaylie.

“You will see,” bubbled Anthony.

Anthony sat down next to Kaylie and the movie came on.Kaylie was happy because the movie Anthony put in was her favorite movie ever. Then at 4:00 the movie ended.

“That was a great movie,” shouted Kaylie.

“Yeah,I can’t believe the dragon didn’t get the princess,”yelled Anthony.

They walked into the tree house in the backyard.They saw a board game and played the board game until it was 5:00.They then heard a weird sound when they came back into the house.Almost like a cat ,but they didn’t know were the cat was.

“Where do you think the cat is?” said Kaylie looking like she was very frightened.

“I think it is in the basement”noted Anthony.

They went down into the old,dark,scary basement. The sound got louder as they went down the stairs to the basement.Their they saw Anthony’s cat fluffernutter meowing for food because she was not fed yet.

“Oh that is why we heard that loud sound down here,” thought Anthony,”Fluffernutter needed some food.”

“Ok,cool well I better get going so by,”explained Kaylie.

She walked out the door and got back home.When she got home she said “Wow that was a crazy day.”

2 thoughts on “The Visit

  1. Good story you told the reader what happened while you were there and made it exciting.I wish you could tell us if you thought it was a cat or not sure.I wonder how long Anthony’s cat had been down there.

  2. It was pretty good but I found some spelling mistakes like when you were talking about Fluffernutter it was not a capital. Over all though it was pretty good.

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