Prologue:
Two cats ran through the undergrowth, one stopped and shouted, “we can’t keep, running we have to hide the kit!” The mother put a small kit inside a tree stump and hid in the bushes. A group of terrified cats came running up to the spot and stopped to sniff the cold air, one found them in the bushes, and they cried, “we don’t have the kit we swear to star clan!” They moved on with the others.
Chapter 1
Skykit awoke to the sound of birds chirping and water dripping, she hurried out off the den to a spot in the grass covered in dew and weeds. She shook her fur to get most of the wet droplets off of her gray, cloudy pelt. It was a normal sunny greenleaf and she smelled the fresh air. She ran toward a branch that had fallen last night and clawed at it playfully.
She heard her mother call her name as a dark gray shape appeared in front of her. This was her father, Darknight. He plucked her off of the ground and walked into the den were her mother was waiting with a happy expression.
Her father set her down and her mom, Lilyheart started to lick her fiercely with long strokes of her rough tongue, then she explained the good news. “Skykit!” She said “You’re becoming an apprentice today!”
Skykit jumped when she heard her moms loud voice and purred, “I’ve been waiting forever and finally I’m ready!” Her mom went to go out of the den to talk with Darknight about the apprentice ceremony.
Skykit went even deeper into the den to tell all the other kits when she got to the next litter one of them was jumping for joy, too. She guessed he was going to become an apprentice, too, so she decided to join in and play fight with the other kits. “I’m the leader of Fireclan!” Skykit declared and jumped on a smaller kit and yelled, “you can not defeat me!” And they both tackled each other and threw moss balls to each other until they heard the yell of Rootstar announcing a meeting.
“All cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather here before Highledge!” He called as he sat on the huge ledge that grew out of his massive rock where a river once ran through. Cats started to gather, and she heard her parents enter the den and call for her and the others. She ran out with two other kits one was the one she was playing with earlier, and another was a bright black and orange turtle shell.
She sat down next to her mother and her father, and listened as Root star spoke, “Today we have three kits that have been waiting for five moons and now are ready to become apprentices!” Skykit shifted her paws excitedly as rootstar called out their names, “Skykit come forward!”
She got up and walked to the front on the rock, she sat next to the leader shivering as all eyes stared at her. The leader spoke again, “In the name of Starclan, watch over this apprentice and teach her many things, your mentor
will be Cloudyeyes!” A white grayish long furred cat walked up with bright blue eyes and touched noses with her. They stood to the side and waiting for Rootstar to call the others up.
“Acorn Kit come forward!” Rootstar called, she saw the turtle shell get up in the crowd of cats as he made his way up to the high ledge, the leader started to speak when there was a yowl in the distance all cats in the crowd stood still staring at the entrance exspecting be attacked, when they heard a mewling kit nearby. ‘It sounds like my age,’ Skykit thought.
A Mudclan warrior came threw the entrance, a couple cats almost pounced on him but then they saw a kit about six months old dangling from his jaws, the leader looked surprised to see only one warrior instead of a whole patrol.
Skykit was very confused because the kit did not smell like any of the clans, it smelled like nothing she had smelled before. It smelled of a mix of rogue, unknown scent, and forest dew. The leader came forward and whispered something in the mud clan warriors ear the mud clan warrior nodded and followed rootstar to his den, “I will finish this ceremony once I talk with this Warrior.” ore will be coming!!!
i forgot to give credit to kate for helping me correct some mistakes in the story the second chapter will be coming soon!
Umm, Sherry… You know how I fixed your many spelling errors? You didn’t give me credit! >:(
Without me the first paragraph would be like:
To cats ran through the underrowth one stoped and shouted we can’t keep, running we have to hide the kit. the mother put a small kit inside tree stump and hide in the bushes. a group of terified cats came running up to the spot stopped to sniff the cold air one found them in the bushes and they cried we don’t have the kit we swear to star clan. they moved on with the others.
Can you please give me credit?! Also, you forgot the “m” in the last sentence, 😛 it says: ore will be coming!!!
I am not super angry, and the emoji with the tongue is supposed to be silly, not mean! 🙂
thanks and i did give you credit in the comments if you’d like i can delete this and pint it again with credit in the post instead of the comments! 😉
lol print in bad at typing that’s why i asked you to look at it lol
Well, Author(s) I loved how the story was flowing in a direction of a mysterious story. I wonder if you guys had more than(then or than?) two people working on the story? I wish there was more to this, good cliffhanger though!
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hello. its me madisyn. i loved how your story made me think of a book that i would read, i wish that you would have given more in the prologue, i wonder if you could add more details to the story. overall, though it is a really good story and i honestly want to read more, so good job!
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hi sherry its cheyanne I really liked how you stared your story,i wonder what they were doing,I wish you would have explained more about what they were doing.
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Hi sherry this is lila I liked your story and how you made it so interesting that I didn’t want to stop reading. I wish you wrote more then what you did to see what happened to the kit. I wonder what will happen next and what skylight would be like. hope you can coem and visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/Millis317/
Yeah i might even ask kate if her character would like to be names skylight for her warrior name. Thanks for the idea – sherry
Hi Sherry, it’s Kate! So, I liked how you (I, we) added a lot of details. I wish you added MudKit, (isn’t he supposed to be SkyKit’s brother? I forget). I wonder who that other kit is. Visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/wenrich4kn/
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I’m not sure if your actually aloud to post this on your blog since Warriors is already a book.
I also have a website you might like since you like the warriors series:
https://blogclan.katecary.co.uk/
I believe this would fall under Fan-Fiction and should be alright as long as it is a new title and not directly taken from the series.
Ok, good 🙂