IT was Christmas eve everyone was sleeping and that’s when good old Santa came down the chimney.The kids woke in fear saying “Who’s Here”. The kids were scared including the one who had a nightmare. The boys woke up to the noise, and one of them hid with their toys. Later the kids heard someone say mmmmmm so they hid in their sisters closet along with their sisters many many shoes. The one girl remembered that she did a trust test to her brother and left her diary down stairs with her tablet hidden close so she could see what was happening with her diary. She remembered that her sisters tablet had an app that was called face gap. So she quietly went to her sisters bed and got her sisters tablet, but her sister said that will not help you so use your head. So she turned on the app called face gap meanwhile her parents she thought her parents were taking a nap.
Hi this is Karis and your story is very interesting. First I looked at the title and there were two ares. But the story it did not talk about presents. The beginning was good.
Dear Madison,
I think your story is cute. I like the part when Santa comes in. And when they hid in the closet.
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Bianca
Dear Massillon,
Great story! I love the creativity you put into this paper!
I enjoyed reading your story.
Hi Madison,
I love your story! I also really enjoy how it was Christmas themed. When I was little, I love those stories. I really like Hockey do you? I Can’t to be partner!
I really like your post!
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From http://ednaonlinem.edublogs.org/ and this mystery is perfect for young readers. I loved it. And I am a particularly picky reader. So congrats! You broke my hard shell of reading which not many do. I am honored to have read your blog! I hope to see many more great posts in the future!
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Dear Madison,
I liked your story. I saw you like to play lacross. I like to play lacross too.
From,
Meredith
Dear Madison this is Chiara,
I liked how you put the title as two parts and then once I started to read your story I thought hmmmmm….. There is no part in your story about presents I also thought that you did a nice job!