Running, running, running
Breathing heavily
Trying to escape
A large, pitch black canine
With razor sharp teeth
And glowing red eyes
It’s getting ever closer
I can hear it’s ragged breathing
It’s heavy footsteps
It’s low yet threatening growl
Don’t let it catch up to me
Don’t look into its eyes, glowing with death
Before the hellhound could reach me
I suddenly awoke
And realized it was only
A nightmare
Love the imagery. The ending– “it was all a dream” — should only be used once in this course. Its too easy of an out!!
Good tension. I would rather it be very REAL in the end.
20/20
I really like your poem, Cody! It’s very descriptive, and I can clearly see an image of the creature in my mind when reading it.
This is a crazy dream dude.
i like that i could picture everything and it was really good overall.