Persuasive Essay

Friendly Nation

      Some laws that are now in our nation (the one we live in) are no littering, you can’t do damage to a preserved area, no polluting, and no drinking while driving. Also if you do these things you might get arrested. In our Free Nation (the one we are writing about) we would change the limit of how long the Senator’s stay in the office. The limit would be six-years. Also another law we would change is, the President could only serve a term in office for six years. Another thing we would add is, all schools and teachers get the same amount of money. They could spend the money on desks,pencils, or markers. Also people should be treated fairly, and have equal rights.

      You should come to our free nation because it is safe, fun, and has everything you could imagine. Candy stores, parks, movie theaters, ice cream, schools, grocery stores, hotels with heated swimming pools Spas, and luxury bedrooms ,and and everything else. You should also come to our free nation because you can bring your friends and family, also you can take as many people as you want to keep you company. Another reason why you should come to our nation is because all the schools have everything your children need to go to school. You don’t have to worry about a thing because the schools that are in our nation have the highest degrees in teaching.

      We have everything you could imagine! We also have stores with clothes,food,water. Basically everything you need to survive. Plus whenever you need a microwave or maybe an oven or a fridge. All you have to do is go to the hardware store and buy it. So these are some reasons why some day you should DEFINITELY come to our nation !

4 thoughts on “Persuasive Essay

  1. Congratulations Abby on being nominated as having the best student blog IN THE WORLD! That is amazing! Great work! Good luck bringing home the title to our Homeroom, where it rightfully belongs! P.S. Great persuasive essay! Murica rules!

  2. I want to congratulate you on your nomination for Best Student Blog. You have worked so hard this year and I am so proud of all the hard work you have put into your blog. Let’s bring home that EDDIES Award for our class and school. Keep up the great work!

  3. Thank you all for the comments. By the way I can’t believe how proud everybody is of me. Especially Mr.Geiman and Mr. Arena. Keep voting !

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