What i’m thankful for
By:Sherry Im thankful for:friends.the second thing is my family . the third thing is my food and water.these things i am very thankful for !…..
Im thankful for :my friends Because they’re a lot of fun. another reason is when down they comfort me and there a lot of company. That’s why i’m so thankful for my friends!!
the second reason is food /water and this is so i don’t starve. another reason is so i don’t die. my third reason is so i don’t get thirsty.that is why i’m so thankful for food and water!!!
I love these things . i’m thankful for
My family because they’re a lot of company . another reason is that they protect me .there cool to !!!.that’s why i love my family. i love all these things. this text is by:Sherry
The end!!.
I like how you wrote who this was by at the end. I wish you would fix all your grammar, and capitalization. Make sure after a period, question mark, or exclamation point that you always put double spaces, but never put as space before one. Also always capitalize your I’s when you are writing something like I went to the store. I wonder how many other things you could come up with that you are thankful for. Also always capitalize your title. Come visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/wenrich4kn/ and comment.
Hi Sherry! I really liked this post because you had an introduction, supporting details, then a summary. I wish you could go back and fix some punctuation. I wonder if you have other things you’re thankful for? Please come and leave a comment on my blog. URl: http://blog.elanco.org/mullins203/
Your Blogging Friend,
Katie
Hi Sherry! I think that your things that you are thankful for are grate things and I wish you would add a little more and I wonder what else you will write and I hope you will visit my blog blog.elanco.org/stoudt296
Hello Sherry I like your blog post because it is really kind and you say that your thankful for everything.What else are you grateful for?? You have missed a few capital letters so can you go and fix them.