“Ahhh! Eli is coming!” shrieked Baby Liza. She’s a baby fish. Hi! I’m Eli, the shark every fish is scared of because I’m the biggest hammerhead. I don’t understand, though. Why are they scared? I am a vegetarian, somehow. I mean, if they really got to know me, they would probably like me. All the meanness started when my sister ate a fish while eating coral, (it was tasty!) but then the mamma got angry because she saw it!
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Dear Natasha,
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