A Challenge at Sea… Free Write

Lost at Sea   Part 1

There once was a mermaid who loved to swim away from home, but one day she swam too far out to hear her parents call. She was also very, very lost. She was lost for over a month, and at that time the search gave up. Then, all of a sudden, a stranger came up to her and invited her to his house. She said no at first, but then thought about her situation and said, “You know what? Sure, whatever.”

Sometime soon he told her his name was Dr. Octo, but she thought something was weird, bad, SCARY about his house. He had a knife collection and scale collection on his walls. She also remembered the story Ma told her about the psycho octopus who hurts all mermaids. She thought it was fake, but this octopus seems to be the guy in the story

“Would you like some fish to eat?” he asked strangely.

“You know, I should really get going.” she said afraid. She really wishes she listened to Ma and Pa.

One thought on “A Challenge at Sea… Free Write

  1. Hi Natasha this is Bethany Online. I live in Quebec.
    I really like mermaids. Why ? because I am on a swim team. I will give the link to my blog http://bethanyonlinem.edublogs.org/
    You can go and see the blog post.
    I truly liked the way you gave a mystery at the end of your post. I hope you post more.
    Bye Bethany

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