MISSION CONTROL Ch 1

MISSION CONTROL Ch 1

 

“WAKE UP, WE CAN’T LOSE YOU  NOW!!!” “WAKE UP! WAKE UP!!!  AAAAAA Chet woke up, and noticed it was a dream.  “WAKE UP!!!”  His sister was yelling at him the whole time.  Chet dreamed he was on a space mission, and something went wrong.  But he didn’t know what.  “Finally you’re wake.”  His sister said under her breath.  His sister was Mia.  Mia was older than Chet, and usually took advantage of it.  Chet was in 5th grade, and Mia was in 9th.  Chet loved space, LOVED it.  He knew so much about it.  When Chet is older, he wants to be an astronaut.

 

Chet wanted to be the first person on mars, but he knew that someone would be there before him.  “Chet, this is why you’re always late for school.”  His mom said.  “You need to learn how to get up more earley, ok?”  Chet’s Mom always tries to get Chet to wake up earlier.  “The bus is here already.”  His mom told Chet.  “ok, i’m not blind I can see that mom.” Chet told his mom.  Chet went outside and got on the bus.  School was very, very boring.  Let me tell you what happened in a few words, math, reading, science, social studies, and other boring things.

 

When Chet got home, his mom wasn’t home.  Neither was Mia.  “Mom Mia, were our you?” Chet asked.  No one answered.  ZZZM, KAPOSH!!!!!!! A massive explosion happened, the whole army was out side.  There was a weird spaceship was heading towards the world.  Aliens were pouring out of the spaceship.  All of the sudden, someone grabbed Chet, it was a soldier.  All of the sudden, a shot went right into Chet.

 

                                                                                                                       To be continued…

3 thoughts on “MISSION CONTROL Ch 1

  • January 19, 2017 at 3:00 pm
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    hi it’s me Lila I really liked how you wrote your story I liked how you put the word to be continued and how he he liked space and how he was always late for the I really liked how you did all of that it was cool I hope part two comes soon I am so excited.

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  • January 24, 2017 at 2:32 pm
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    The next story will come out very soon! Be sure to check it out! ?

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  • March 30, 2017 at 1:11 pm
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    Hey A$HTON! It’s Finn Online from Quebec, Canada and I’m really loving your blog! This post particularly interested me because it seemed like an interesting story and boy was I right! I really enjoyed this post because I find it was very well written. Any way just wanted to congradulate you on this exciting post and I hope you’ll visit my blog at http://finnonlineo.edublogs.org/.

    -Sincerely Finn

    PS. I read your “All About Me” and you said you liked video games, I do too! I’d love to see a video game post because I’m sure you’d nail it!

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