In chapter 1 of The Watsons Go To Birmingham, we learned that it is winter time and it is very cold. There is a family of five who live in Flint, Michigan. The characters are Mom, Dad, Joetta, Byron, and Kenny, the narrator. One of the problems is that there is no heat in the house. The second problem is that Mom does not like living in Flint, Michigan and she wants to live in Alabama. First, since the heat wasn’t working they had called their “mean aunt” to ask if they can stay there for a while until the heat worked so dad asked Byron and Kenny to scrape their car window. Then, the brothers are arguing because they have to scrape the windows on the car. After that, Byron kisses the mirror and gets stuck and Momma came running out panicking and dad was trying not to laugh. Then, they got hot water and it froze when it got on his lips. So they ripped Byron’s lips off of the mirror and he hurry up and went inside and Momma put vaseline on his lips. Now his brother is going to make a comic book about Byron as a superhero. The superheros name is going to be named the Lipless Wonder.
Hello Dominick. I have read the Watsons go to birmingham before it is a great book. I like that you thoroughly explained what happened in the chapter you read. I wish that you would check your grammar in some of your sentences. There seems to be some false grammar. I wonder do you like the book?
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Hi Dominick you gave a lot about how Byron kissed the window and you didn’t include Bumphead.Dominick you didn’t include how kenny was getting bullied in chapter 1. An you didn’t include how Moma,Joetta,Byron,Dad, and Kenny were in the living room and cold. I like how you said Kenny was going to make a book about Byron kissing the car and call it the lipless wonder.An you have good grammar good paragraph and I bet many more to come.
Hi Dominick I like your passage But for the title of the book you need to make it Italic or bolded.