When I grow up I want to be a police officer because I don’t like people who are bad and i want to make this world better so we have less problems. I am going to arrest people who break the law and if I see them i will arrest them. I am also going to talk to kids and help them make good choices like, look for cars, be drug free and don’t do them when they get older and to trust cops. Did you know that if you don’t smoke and do drugs you will live a better and longer life because if you smoke and do drugs you can be unhealthy and be stressed out all the time?
I like how you decided to be a Police officer when you grow up. You had perfect grammar and good spelling. I also love your details about you are also going to talk to kids and help them make good choices like, look for cars, be drug free and don’t do them when they get older and to trust cops.
I like the job you picked.Nice
you did a good job but I what to now if you are good for this job and how you are.
good job dom
I like your job that you picked,but you need a comma at a few sentences.
The things wrong with this are that you aren’t capitalizing The I and you put a comma before you made the list and after the and you put something else,so that should have been in the list and you also didn’t put commas before the conjunction.
Capitalize I and shorten your sentences.
Y forgot to capitalize a lot of your I’
Hi dominic this is jevon martin. This is a great job for you to do for being a wrestler and all keep up the good work at wrestling. These are good tips thank you.
I wish you wood capitalize your I’s.
I like that you want to make the world a beater pales.
Hi Dominic, This is Aara I want to become an ips officer. Well done 👍
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Hi, when I grow up I would love to be a police man or police woman as I look up to you everyday. I love following rules and doing what’s best for us and our community.
Yours sincerely
James
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Ok cool I’m going out of the car now I have a few things I need you can come over and help you out I have a few things I need you can come over and help you get some rest and I have to go to the house to do the homework homework on my way to work I have a lot to go now I can get my car done I can come by now I have a lot to go and I’m going out of the house to go now to go get my stuff and I can come in the house.
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