Black Bear Vally Part 6 By:Ash and Lily

Black Bear Valley part 6

Characters:Rania,Denis,Sue,Will,Mac,Meg,Ma,Pa,Gregory,Se-gray,and sam

Narrator:last we started of Sue was going to meet Meg’s mom.

Sue: hi you must be Laura Meg’s mom

Ma:Yep and you must be Sue Rania’s mom

Sue:yep Thats me.

Meg:Ma…. Ma Pa needs you!

Ma:I’m coming

Narrator: Ma walks down the hill to find Pa

Pa:Dark clouds are coming you know what this means


Pa:Winters here and it’s going to take too long to get their house up

Ma:Uh oh

Sue:What will We do if we can’t put up our house?

Ma:You can stay with us.

Sue: thank you Laura

Pa: Get everything inside our house before it all gets wet from the snow

Narrator: They got everything inside before the snow would start

Ma:Me,Pa,Gregory,Sue,Denis’ and Will have to go hunt and get some food before the storm arrives so watch over each other Meg and Rania and DON’T GO OUTSIDE!

Meg and Rania: Ok

Narrator:They go out to hunt and gather fruits and Meg Mac Sue and Segray stay inside.  It starts raining.  Just then Meg remembers something.

Meg:We forgot about the firewood!

Rania:Where did you put it!

Meg: Outside in the snow!!

Rania:We need to get it.

Meg:But Ma said not too


Meg: Ok

Narrator:they went out and got all the wood while the storm was still going.  Then they heard a soft mewing sound.

Meg: What’s that?


Meg: who’s Sam?


6 thoughts on “Black Bear Vally Part 6 By:Ash and Lily

  1. Hello again Lily,

    I hope you had a good week. I hope you had a great ‘blogging’ week. Just to check are you prepared for the commenting game that will be coming up as part of the Student Challenge in a couple of weeks?
    1. Have you at least 5 other student blogs linked on the sidebar of your blog; blogs from other students around the world, not just those in your class or school. I see you have done this.
    2. Do you have a blogroll or link category called Global students or Global classes. I put a link about how to do this in my previous message. Great I see you have done this too.

    So Ms. Wyatt’s essentials in a great post are below. I have added whether I think you have achieved this in your most recent post:
    1. A catchy title
    2. At least one visual (with attribution) whether photo, cartoon, video or another web 2.0 tool like padlet or glogster. This would be good.
    3. An interesting topic with your passion for the subject coming through. Is this post based on a story you have read?
    4. A post that is well written and not copy/pasted from somewhere else.
    5. A post has been proofread and spellchecked. Remember sentences start with a capital letter.
    6. One that is written in paragraphs – at least three of them. You have written a script so I understand that there are no paragraphs.
    7. One that includes links to other websites on similar topics – at least two of these. Many students are not doing this. There is a good trick to get people to read more of your blog and to stay longer. You could say, and if you enjoyed this post by me, why not read … and leave a link to another post.

    Ms.Wyatt says that if your post covers the seven things mentioned above e.g. has a catchy title, includes at least one visual etc. etc., it will be added to the flipboard magazine.

    Could you make any changes so that it would score 7 out of 7?

    When you have done that, Ms. Wyatt suggests you go to the blogging challenge and leave a comment on this post.
    Here is the link to the post she is talking about:

    Just to remind you she asks that you ‘mention what topic you wrote about and leave a link to your post’….not a link to your blog but to the post.

    I would also make clear that this post is not ‘other homework’ but a response to the Student Blogging Challenge by adding the hashtag
    #stubc17 Week 6 to the title.

    Hope you find this helpful. With every good wish
    Merry Beau

  2. Hi there,
    Hope you are getting on well with your best ever post. I look forward to reading it. Be sure to reply to those who comment on your blog 🙂
    With every good wish
    Merry Beau

  3. As the Student Blogging Challenge ends, goodbye from me in Ireland and the best of luck to you in the future,
    With every good wish,
    Merry Beau

  4. You did a wonderful job on your play it was funny and also had detail to and I like how you put every line as a different Pearson and the Pearson that I liked the most is rina and I hope you like my post and I loved you play

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