What Peace Is
In my opinion peace is no war everyone is nice to each other. It is equality from your gender to your color. If everything isn’t peaceful nobody will feel comfortable walking around or going to school like Malala . And peace isn’t just physical it’s mental. If a war just ended to be peaceful, push it aside and regather yourself.
Peace is important to us because if there is no peace we will have a war and nobody would want to stick together. If we had no peace we would walk around scared or not even walk around. That is why we all have to stick together.
If we didn’t have peace the world would look different because everyone would want to be far from each other. There also might not be the same places because if there is war some places might be blown up or buildings could be demolished.
I like how you put the words in paragraphs.