“Woosh, this summer I flew to paradise, Florida!” We left on June 3rd at 6:00 PM, it was a sunny hot day, and perfect skies to fly in. I went with my sister, my dad, and my mom. The reason we went is because we went to a friends wedding.It was relaxing fun and exiting.
First, we went to Disney world! The rides were so much fun! The best ride of the night was a roller coaster in the bark, it was so much fun! Then In about the middle of the day I started feeling dizzy, and then I felt like I was getting weaker and I was panting really hard, then I told my mom she said that I was dehydrated. That was a real bummer for me. After all of that was over, at night there was a dance party with the Incredible, it was a blast! Then Mrs.Incredible started to with my dad, but my dad just kind of walk away ( he is not much of a dancer.)
next we we went to Epcot. To be honest I liked Epcot better than Disney world. In Epcot it was so much fun going and seeing all the different countries. My favorite country was in morocco, is my favorite because it has so many cool clothing, Jewelry, and very interesting foods. Then, at each country there each had a princess there, like in morocco there was Aladdin and Jasmine, (which are my favorite prince and princess). Then me and my sister got these passport that we filled out at each country. On the flight home, me and my sister put the stickers on each page, to tell where we were.
Finally, we got to a wedding. It was in a small church. The ceremony was beautiful! The food was amazing! My favorite food was the mac-and-cheese. Lastly my favorite part of the whole wedding was the dancing! It was so much fun, the songs they had were, the cupid shuffle, and a bunch more fun song! Then it was over and we went back to the hotel.
Now are trip is over and it’s time to go back home. When we left I thought about how much fun we had in disney world, on the rides, at epcot going to all the different countries, and filling out my passport, and lastly going to the wedding and dancing on the dance floor. I will never forget this experience.
I like how you wrote every single detail of your trip. I wonder how your family felt about the trip? I wish you went there for longer, so you could write more! Come and visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/martin3z3/Martin3z3 and leave a comment. PS I went to Disney for a week!
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Hi Rebekah. It’s Summer. I liked how you stated your opinion about Epcot and Disney World. I think that when you meant to write “park” you wrote “bark”. Also, you forgot to capitalize next in your 3rd paragraph. And fun song is supposed to be fun songs. What flavor was the wedding cake? 🙂 Please come to my blog and leave a comment. Visit http://blog.elanco.org/stern338/Stern338
I like how you said that you liked Epcot better than Disney, when I went I saw every country except for Japan because my Mom, and Dad knew my brother and I would go crazy. I wish you said what rides you went on. I wonder what foods they have in Morocco. Come visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/wenrich4kn/
Well I would tell you what rides I went on but I forget there names.