Adventures In Candy Land Chapter 3
Adventures In Candy Land Chapter 3
The Close Survival
If you haven’t read parts 1 and 2 you should read them before reading this chapter. Enjoy!
“Oh, no,” said Mammoth. “We have to hide,” said Joe. They started running, but then they got cornered by a wall. “We’re done for,” said Mammoth. They started climbing the wall over
to the key. They got it, and climbed over to the cage. They opened the cage but then fell down into a deep hole. Then they heard them put 5 layers of metal on top of them, and they saw a bomb drop into the hole.
The bomb was set for 10 minutes. “We have to get out of here,” said Joe. “Here’s your little friend too,” said Lord Licorice. “They’ll never know,” said Lord Licorice. “Never know what?” Joe said in confusement. “This mystery just keeps getting weirder, and weirder,” said Mammoth. The bomb was now set for 9 min. “I think I hear guards above us,” said Mammoth. “I have an idea, we can dig a hole up to where the guards do then dig a hole and go inside and cover it up when the bomb explodes it will go up the whole, and knock down the guards then we escape,” said Joe.
They did Joe’s plan. When the bomb exploded it knocked down the guards, and they escaped. “Wow that was awesome,” said Mammoth as they were running. Just then Joe tripped and tripped Mammoth. The other person didn’t notice and kept running till they escaped. Then Lord Licorice came, and captured them. He put them in a cage and threw the key in the lava. Then he put them hanging on a rope above lava and took a timer and when it ringed a knife would cut the rope and they would fall into the lava.
He set the timer for 48 hours. “If you want to escape you should stop thinking about it, you are in the middle of a circle with no way to get out, but if somehow you do escape the lava there are guards surrounding you, but if you want to escape good luck you have 2 days,” said Lord Licorice. Then he was off. “We’ll have to think of a plan,” said Mammoth. Then Joe looked up and saw all Lord Licorces creations, he hated Lord Licorice so he threw a stone at 1 of his inventions, but he accidently threw it too hard and it knocked it over, and it fell into his hands.
It said,” The hungry gun.” He read the instructions and they said,” Shoot somebody with it and they will get so hungry they can’t help it.” Just then an idea went to Mammoth’s mind. “ I Have an idea, we can shoot all the guards with the hungry gun and they will go away to try to get something to eat then we will shake the cage and it will break on that point and we will fall out and escape,” said Joe. “Let’s wait til midnight,” said Mammoth. Mammoth said this because he knew guards would switch, and the guards on duty in the day would be asleep, so if they escaped and the guards saw them they wouldn’t have much help and it would be easier to escape.
They looked up the clock. “Hey Mammoth, we only have 20 hours left,” said Joe. “Don’t worry we have 3 hours til midnight. 3 hours passed by and Mammoth saw the guards switching. “Ok, let’s wait til they’re all in position, then we’ll escape,” said Mammoth. When all the guards were in position Joe began shooting them with the hungry gun. They heard complaints saying, “Why do we have to starve just because of these stupid kids?” “I’m so hungry.” Then they all ran to eat. “Now,” said Mammoth. They started shaking the cage, until it reached the point and it broke the cage, but they didn’t jump out in time and they started falling down to the lava.
To be continued…
Hello again Emmanuel,
I hope you had a good week. I hope you had a great ‘blogging’ week. Just to check are you prepared for the commenting game that will be coming up as part of the Student Challenge in a couple of weeks?
1. Have you at least 5 other student blogs linked on the sidebar of your blog; blogs from other students around the world, not just those in your class or school.
2. Do you have a blogroll or link category called Global students or Global classes. I put a link about how to do this in my previous message.
So Ms. Wyatt’s essentials in a great post are below. I have added whether I think you have achieved this in your most recent post:
1. A catchy title. Adventures in Candyland is a good title.
2. At least one visual (with attribution) whether photo, cartoon, video or another web 2.0 tool like padlet or glogster. This would be REALLY good.
3. An interesting topic with your passion for the subject coming through. I can tell you enjoy story writing.
4. A post that is well written and not copy/pasted from somewhere else. Yes yours is original.
5. A post has been proofread and spellchecked. Yes yours is accurate.
6. One that is written in paragraphs – at least three of them. Good you have clear paragraphs.
7. One that includes links to other websites on similar topics – at least two of these. Many students are not doing this. There is a good trick to get people to read more of your blog and to stay longer. I see you have said, and if you enjoyed this story by me, why not read Candyland 1 and 2. Why not leave a link to the other Candyland episodes.
Ms.Wyatt says that if your post covers the seven things mentioned above e.g. has a catchy title, includes at least one visual etc. etc., it will be added to the flipboard magazine.
Could you make any changes so that it would score 7 out of 7?
When you have done that, Ms. Wyatt suggests you go to the blogging challenge and leave a comment on this post.
Here is the link to the post she is talking about: http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/04/23/week-6-what-to-write-about/
Just to remind you she asks that you ‘mention what topic you wrote about and leave a link to your post’….not a link to your blog but to the post.
I would also make clear that this post is not ‘other homework’ but a response to the Student Blogging Challenge by adding the hashtag
#stubc17 Week 6 to the title.
Hope you find this helpful. With every good wish
Merry Beau
I hope you enjoy Games Week on the Student Blogging Challenge. https://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/05/07/week-8-games-and-more-games/
Week 8! Just two more challenge weeks after this.
Don’t forget to reply to the comments your visitors leave.
With every good wish
Merry Beau
I am really looking forward to what to write for this week’s challenge;
The 9th week of the Student Blogging Challenge
Write the very best post you can for your teachers and visitors to read.
You can read more about what Ms.Wyatt wants you to do here:
http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/05/14/week-9-have-i-improved/
Good luck 🙂
Hi there,
Hope you are getting on well with your best ever post. I look forward to reading it. Be sure to reply to those who comment on your blog 🙂
With every good wish
Merry Beau
As the Student Blogging Challenge ends, goodbye from me in Ireland and the best of luck to you in the future,
With every good wish,
Merry Beau
You to By Have a nice summer vacation!!!