on I think the best way to write a comment is the way my teacher explained to me. Star, Wish, Wonder. Star means put in one or 2 sentences why you liked the post. Wish is when you tell them what you should of added to make it better. Wonder is when you think of what they added and how they could have made it smaller, bigger, etc. I think that is the best way to write a great comment.
on The worst thing happened to me today. A giant almost ate me alive! I had to run and…. (freeze) So your wondering why i’m telling you this. It’s kind of sort of because I climbed up a beanstalk and found a castle with a giant in it. The giant was fierce, mighty, and very strong. I dont know how he caught up, he was so super slow. But at one point, there was a kid named jack. Jack came out, slayed the giant, and then dug a cloud grave. Even though he almost ate me alive, we said our goodbyes. Good times, Good times. (Unfreeze.) He tried to eat me. I also couldn’t run, hide, or do anything to stop him. But Jack came and slayed him. I was so scared i ran home and promised myself I would not tell anyone anything about this.
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Trains for sports
Yells to pump up the crowd
Likes to play basketball
Eats a lot
Rituals
on My favorite memory! By: Tyler Mu. and Hanna.
My favorite memory is when i went to disney world. Disney World is a fun outdoor amusement park that has over 80 rides to ride! I love to ride the “Big Thunder Mountain!” It is a big in and outdoor roller coaster. Some parts are inside, some are outside. I also like Mt. Everest the roller coaster. I like going backwards when the yeti stops you in your tracks. The last ride i want to talk about is the race car ride. So you basically get in a car and you go about 30mph or more. It’s crazy, but i love going with my family members. I went with my Mom, Dad, Brother, Sister, Cousins, Grandparents, and Aunts and Uncles. I would love to go there again. It was a great experience. I was only there when i was 8 years old. We drove down to Orlando, Florida. It took about 18 hours not including breakfast stops and bathroom break stops. I spent over $100 on souvenirs, but my family spent over $3000 on the whole trip.
My favorite memory is when I went To california. When I went to California to see my family that I haven’t seen in a very long time. I went to California with my Grandparents and little brother. I went to go see my Aunt, Uncle and Cousins. My Aunt’s name is Niquole. My Uncle’s name is Andrew but we call him Drew. My cousins name is London, Skyler, Pierce. Now they have a new addition to their family and her name is Aria. We went to the beach and Had a great time. We decided to fly to California and fly home from California. We stopped in Nashville on the way home. My family spent over 900 dollars on the whole trip.
In all we both had fun with our family. Also, we loved the places we went, and we loved the memory. I loved disney World and Hanna loved California. I also liked to spend time with my family and have a great time playing games, riding riding rides, and also going out to eat. It was a great 7 days and i would love to go back again. I would love to be able to go back to California again. I loved being able to go to the beach and spend time with my family. It was an amazing 16 days , I would definitely go back again.
on When snow falls on the floor.
I Love winter out of all the other seasons. (except summer.)
No sun on a snow day.
The gifts you receive and give on Christmas day.
Endless fun in the snow.
Repeats every single year.
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What is the “Creative Academy” and how does Jake Semple end up going there? List all the members of the Applewhite family and explain what each of their talents or jobs is. Why does E.D. think she is different than the other Applewhites? What are they like? What is she like?
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The creative academy is a jail that is made for bad kids. If kids are doing illegal or really bad things they go to juvenile. I think juvenile is a bad place for kids. It should not ever be in your life. If you do something bad, like really bad, sorry to say, but you’re going to juvenile. Jake ends up going there because he is being bad and there is no place for him to stay at the Applewhites house.
All the members of the Applewhites family are E.D., lucille, Destiny, Uncle Archie, Zedediah’s, Archie. Archies talent is dancing. E.D Thinks she is different from the other applewhites because nobody likes the art project she made and she thinks they thing that she is invisible. E.D. Thinks she is really different from the other Applewhites. She hates Jake Semple, She acts like no one cares for her, and also she does not get along with destiny.
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I would rather go sky diving than scuba diving. I have always wanted to go skydiving. It would be cool jumping out of a plane. I also have never flown in a plane so i think that would also be really cool.I would rather jump out of a plane than swim with the fish and sharks and any other of scary animals in the sea. (Shivers.) Jumping out of a plane might sound and seem scary, but I think it would be a good experience before you get older and cant do it.I have never done it before but i think it would be cool jumping out of planes.
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If I was an animal in a zoo I would be a parrot. Being a parrot I would hate being caged in a zoo. When people come and visit/watch me I feel sad because when there are kids who are usually with their parents and I can’t be with mine if I’m in a box. Another way I would feel about people watching me is mad because they always tap on the glass and drive me nuts! The last way I feel about people watching me is depressed because they get to go about the world while I’m stuck in a glass box.
If I was an animal is the zoo, I would be a tiger since they get a larger habitat. I would rather roam free but it fascinates people to see a tiger. Some tigers are very rare. I think the ones at the zoo are Bengal Tigers. Bengal tigers are very rare. They are usually seen in Africa or Australia. But there are 2 at the Philadelphia zoo right now! I would not like have people staring at me all day. People could be weird sometimes, they might just stay there. I would not like to live in a habitat, I want to live free.
If I was an animal in a zoo like I said before I would be a parrot because they can fly around. I would hate having people watch me all day because then I couldn’t get and rest with everyone ponding on the glass and yelling at me to wake up. Another reason I would hate to be a zoo animal is because people would always be watching me and I think that’s creepy. The last reason why I wouldn’t like to be a zoo animal is because I would always have people be coming into my cage. Nobody would like to be caged in at a zoo. I would like to be a tiger, but not caged up with people staring at me. If I were a tiger, I would need to be free in the wild.
on Tyler Murphy: Italicized Cam Martin: Regular
I think that without the voting system americans would be out of control because when people vote it lets them agree on a leader and if we didn’t have that then we probably would have some crazy leader that none likes. I think that we would end up with a leader that no one likes because if we didn’t vote then we wouldn’t have a say in what leaders we have. With the voting system we have a say in what leaders we want to have but without the voting system people would just apply and get the job. If people we didn’t have the voting system then people wouldn’t be able to express themselves in their opinion. If we didn’t have the voting system people would have no idea what is going on.
That was Cam’s point of view, now it’s my turn. I think it would be really weird, no one would be president, or anyone could run for president. Even if they didn’t have any education they would still become president. Also, you would have presidents that would be bad. They could have committed a crime. The last opinion in my point of view is there should not be no voting because random people could join government and presidency. We will talk more about not having a voting system in the next paragraph. What do you guys think, would you want a voting system like we already have, or would you want to have where anyone can be a governor or president?
I think that if we didn’t have the voting system then we wouldn’t have a president. I think that if we didn’t have the voting system we wouldn’t have a president because we wouldn’t be able to agree on a president and we would get a random president. I also think that without the voting system we would get a random president because nobody would be vote for a president. I agree with Cam. I think we would have no president or no governors. Our world would be out of control. We would also not have elections, so nobody could be president. The only way would be to fake it. Not even be elected (Even though there are no elections). Random people could be governors and presidents.
on I worked as a part of a team before. I work as a part of a team when I play basketball.We work as a team, we pass, talk about the game-plan, and work together. we like to practice our shooting too. We usually do scrimmage at practice. Scrimmage is where your team plays against each other. Its kind of confusing to explain what scrimmage is, but its where u have 2 captains, they pick someone on your team to be on there team and you pick until no one is left. Then you play against each other. You also have to work as a team while playing in a real game or championship. In order to work as a team you have to pass, get a good ball handle skill, and help your teammate out if he got push or accidentally shoved to the ground. Hopefully you have a good teammate that passes, shoots, steals, blocks, and has good ball handling. Not everyone can do that, for instance I cant block, i’m only 4’9, and my brother cant rebound, but like I said, that’s not for everyone. But that is all i have to say about basketball and how I worked a a team, and also, how you can work as a team.
