March
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A Star A Wish And A Wonder
A star a wish and a wonder is one way you can comment I am going to be telling you how to use them!
star, A star is to give a complement or say something that you liked about the post. for example I love how you gave a lot of details!
wish, A wish is something you want to know more about or something you do not understand. for example I wish you told me more about why you love dogs so much.
wonder, A wonder is a question or something you do not understand. for example I wonder why if you like dogs so much why don’t you have one?
as you can see a star a wish and a wonder can help you comment and the reader understand what you are commenting about.
Hi Abigail
I have looked at all the posts on your blog and I think that they are all super creative!
congratulations on winning!
Those cookies look delicious yum
Where in the world are you from??
Thanks so much on commenting on my post and I am trying to use your star wish and a wonder now.
From Jemimah
http://jemimahw619.edublogs.org/
thanks for coming to my blog i am from usa / Pennsylvania thanks so much for being my first comment!!!!
Hi Abbie,
Your description of your family is wonderful! I wonder if it is challenging to take care of so many pets?
I enjoyed the way you described how to comment on posts. Your list of stars, wishes, and wonders make commenting sound magical.
I wish I knew how you came up with such an engaging way to explain commenting.
Take care and happy writing!
Mrs. D
hi thank for commenting and it is very hard having so many pets and i used to have around 5 fish and thanks for your nice comments have a great day, Abby
Hi my name is James and I love your blog come check out our blog at https://learning1234life.edublogs.org
hi James i will come check out your blog!
G’day Abby,
I had heard of the star, wish and wonder form of commenting. I think it began as a form of peer assessment with younger children with two stars and a wish. Maybe the older children changed it to a star, a wish and a wonder. Here is Mr McCray’s grade 5 class guidelines http://mrmccraysclass.edublogs.org/8-2/
You and your class members might like to visit his blog and leave a star, a wish and a wonder on one of his posts.
Hi i will come check it out thanks for coming to my blog!
Hi there. I was a grade 2 teacher for a long time, and we always used the 3 stars and a wish format when kids were presenting their work in the author chair. I’m glad you recommended it here, and I love the wonder step.
So, for your post:
Star – thanks for explaining this star-wish-wonder strategy so well.
Wish – maybe you could have given examples
Wonder – I’m wondering about your other posts. The commenters above have been very complimentary. I’m going to go read the rest now.
Cheers!
Hi thanks for such a nice comment and thank you for commenting have a great day!!