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How can drama help you better understand the feelings and viewpoints of characters?

Ryan:Normal

Joey:Italics

Drama can help you better understand the feelings by explaining it more even though its drama.

Also Drama can help the story be much better because it adds mixed feelings to the book or story you are reading and the characters have feelings it makes the book much better so that’s one way drama can help a story.  

Another way Drama can help you better understand the story is that when there is drama in a story it gets you farther into the book and then it helps you get closer to the end with all the mixed feelings. Drama also helps it by giving it more excitement to the story and making the reader want to continue reading. Without drama a book would not be exciting to read and it would be very boring to read.

This is my avatar. I created it using this website http://www.reasonablyclever.com/mini-mizers/classic-kid-safe-mini-mizer/ feel free to go check it out and create one yourself. This avatar represents me because my favorite color is red and it has a red hat on and shirt. It also represents me because it has a hat on. I love hats! It has a bow and I like bows a lot, especially in video games when you unlock it! This was all about me and my avatar and how it represents me!

Ryan:Regular       Our Favorite Memory                            

Derek:Italic
My partner’s favorite memory is when he got his xbox one. It is his favorite memory because he did not expect it, and his favorite game came out! He was super happy and excited. He was excited so he could play and his friends had it so he really wanted it to play with them and have fun. Derek was so happy when he got it. He was very shocked and surprised when he got the xbox one because he did not think he was going to get it.

Ryan’s Favorite memory is when his basketball team went undefeated and won the championship. They had 17 wins and 0 losses in all. Ryan was very happy when they won the championship. He had 17 points. That season he also had his career high of 30 points in one game. Afterwords the team got trophies and pizza!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was all about our favorite memories I hope you guys enjoyed and can relate to our favorite memories. Our favorite memories are very cool I hope you think so.

Why is everyone scared of me? I’m just another fish. Today I am gonna go out and try to make friends. I said hello to a fish and it immediately ran away. I don’t know why everyone is scared of me I just want to make friends. I asked another fish and he said I will only be your friend if you be nice to me and never hurt me. I said okay and I  was so happy I finally had a friend. We became best friends and played with each other every day.

I would rather go scuba diving because I am absolutely petrified of heights. Going skydiving is my worst nightmare. Scuba diving would also be very fun. You could see many fish swimming, you could explore and see what it is like in the sea or ocean. Another reason I would go scuba diving is because you can swim, and I love swimming. I am like super scared to sky dive. My body would be shaking a ton, because of how scared I would be. I personally think scuba diving is more safe. When skydiving you could really hurt your body. Scuba diving would be very interesting to see all the animals and see how they would react to you and how they would move around. I would also want to see the many plants like coral,seaweed,etc.