Free write

Alien Visitor

 

Q: You are the commander of a space ship from a far away planet. This is your first visot to planet Earth and you must report back to your homeland about what you see. You are able to zoom in on all the areas of Earth and see all the unique and wonderful chactristics of the third planet from the sun.

 

“Commander here. I am about to land on Earth. You copy?” “Copy!” Says Oh. Oh is the guy that answers all of our space calls. As I land on Earth I say, “Oh do I have to do this? There are these monsters that are barking at me! HELP!” Oh responds,”Well did you try scaring them away? Did you land the space ship properly?” As I jump out of my seat I say, ” Oh you wont believe this! You should have come with me! It’s so beautiful!” “Get back on track Commander! Your mission is to search for features of Earth, the third planet from the sun, that we don’t know or have. Got it?” “Got it!” I say.

“I am back!” I say reporting back to Oh. ” Go ahead, I copy.” Oh says. ” I am here at a big hut ( a house ) and there is this big shiny thing with humans inside!” “That’s so weird!” Says Oh.

A little later the commander took a tent from a hut and decided to go camping. “I think I will make what ever the humans are doing!” Commander says to himself. Commander makes a fire, which he does not know what that means. ” Cool! ” says commander. Since commander is an alien he walks into the fire! “Hot, Hot, Hot!” “Oh here how are you doing?” Commander responds saying, “Hot, Hot, Hot!” “Are you ok?” Says Oh. “Not really because this aliens on fire!” Says commander laughing. “You better be joking!” Yells Oh. “I am. Well I walked throw fire not knowing what was going to happen.” “Oh ok.” Says Oh.

Commander kept going and saw these places, the Great Wall of China, the Golden Gate Bridge, tons of attractions, the Grand Canyon and Disney Land. Some of the attractions include camping, Knobels, the White House and so much more. Commander walked back to his spaceship. On his way back he saw large sections of water. (I think that is what it is called.)

“Commander here I am on my way back from Earth. Do you copy?” “Copy”, says Oh. “I had an amazing trip. I saw so many pretty sights. I went cs,ping, saw the Grsnd Canyon, Disneyland, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Great Wall of China. I saw monsters that bark and try to hurt me and big shiny things that have humans inside. You have got to go!” “Wow, sounds amazingly!” replies Oh. “See you next time on planet Earth!”

THE END!