HAUNTED TRAILER 24hr

a HAUNTED  TRAILER 24hr CHALLENGE By these people Joseph Baer Dalton Wing Kohl Laramie Caden Zook Justin Jagiah and Andrew Moyer                                              

 

Joseph, Kohl, Justin, Caden, Dalton, Noah, and Andrew were walking home from school. And they saw this trashed trailer. They left all there stuff there. They were thinking about having a 24hr challenge. They think it was built in 1997, but they don’t know. They knew it was not fixable. There was phones, but the electrictricity didn’t work. Joseph went to his house to charge the phones they were flip phones they had 911 so they felt safe. Then they thought they heard there old truck come back after all of those years, but they just thought their ears were tricking them. They were hungry. They got food and drinks. It was in the middle of the night. Then they heard a high pitched screaming sound. There was so much trash in the house there was computers sitting and a laptop. Books shoes clothes socks gloves. moldy musty smell chewed up stuff. From there they had 2 Pitbulls. Boxes. everywhere even the original xbox. The first one! They brought sleeping bags and pillows and pajamas because, they were going to have a little party. They brought all they needed from Joseph’s house because, it was right down the road. So they weren’t worried or scared. Did you hear said Kohl. Joseph said YES THAT IS THE TRUCK I HEAR IT i hear it loud and clear. do you think THEY ARE COMING BACK? Kohl said i don’t know we heard  the door open they came in Joseph  Kohl and Justin went to hide they fell down and heard MOUSE! Screeeeeeech Joseph bought the place how could they come back? THAT’S BREAKING AND ENTERING they got the flip phones out and called 911 this is the actual call 911 what’s your emergency um i’m in the house me and my dad bought the people who trashed the house came back to the trailer we bought is that breaking and entering i’m using the phone i found there send SOMEONE!!!! Okay said the lady we’ll send someone okay. Joseph Kohl and Justin weren’t scared they heard sirens they heard the guys say oh nooooooo they tried to hide. It was a fake siren said the guys we said what WHY is that fake she said in 24 hours she will send a cop said Kohl. We should say GET OUT no said Kohl we will camp in the woods till they leave. But what if they stay the night  well we’ll just wait. They’re leaving let’s go back in then. We will think of a plan if they come back oh Justin has an idea let’s do boobytraps. Hey Joseph said i found fishing string let’s make them trip in their own trash ha ha we all said good plan guys right they said RIGHT they are back boys!! So were all ready right. YES they all said they came in then they fell in there own trash and rotten food they were wimpy so they started getting mad we went outside and saw a deer Justin Joseph and Kohl went after it by hand and ate it then they heard the truck start and they left really loud. Were they gone for good that time we don’t know they all said then we saw a abandoned shed with stuff in it we should look inside and look for more tools to use if there is something we need to protect ourselves with like a hammer or something sharp. We should go to the gas station for a midnight snack or something then we come back. We’re back let’s look behind the shed for stuff. OMG there’s 4 fourwheelers and 4 DIRTBIKES back there guys.Then Joseph Andrew caden Kohl Justin went on the dirtbikes and fourwheelers then They saw people chasing us we all said pin it then we drove to the gas station because we needed gas cause the dirt bike and the fourwheeler needed gas it was so old so they needed gas so they went to turkey hill  then they saw the people then we pinned the dirt bikes and the fourwheelers and then we saw the guys from the trailer then they started running at us we drove as fast as we could then we hid then we saw them then they rode away fast on dirt bikes and fourwheelers finally the people gave up they slept in there truck it’s 3:00 am guys time to go back they went at least 140 mph they got drinks dinner and extra snacks and a gas can if they ran out of gas they completed it and all went home.                                                                                                                                                                                                             

 

2 thoughts on “HAUNTED TRAILER 24hr

  1. Hi Joseph, this is Elise and I like how you put detail into your story with lots of characters. When there are more characters, there is usually more going on in the story. I wish that you had the right grammar in some places and make sure that you don’t use and for the beginning of a sentence. I wonder why you made this story?
    Please come and comment on my blog!!! 🙂 http://blog.elanco.org/krock950/

    See you next time! Happy Blogging!

  2. Thanks for commenting on my blog i made this because there is this creepy trailer near my house filled with trash they had a some dirt bikes there so that’s why i made this.

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