The Time I Won Something

When me the Coaches Rachel,Sophia, and Bella went to the girls on the run race,we had to get ready. We stretch out ran for a little, we were nervous. But we did not stop us, We went outside for the race. There were lots of girl on the run people. When we did the race,it was raining but that did not stop us. When the race was done it was so tiring to do but we got a metal and some snacks, it was so fun. When I got home me and my dad got dinner after that, I went to sleep and the race was so fun. I dream about  the race and all my friends.

 

3 thoughts on “The Time I Won Something

  1. what I liked about the story was You and your friends were working together.
    I wish you would’ve add what place you were in.
    I wonder how you won the race?

  2. I liked how you did it about Girls on the run. I personally love girls on the run.
    I wish you told me who your running budy was.
    I wonder why you said I was your coach.

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