My Fam
In my family there are a lot of people, I have two people cousins on each side of my family. My first cousins are Caiden and Griffin, and my other first cousins our Cullen and Kate. I have one brother, and a dog. My brother’s name is Connor, and my dog’s name is Gabby. I also have a Mom and a Dad. My Mom’s name is Jodi, and my Dad’s name is Zac. I have two aunts and uncles two. Heidi and Steve, and Shannon and Wes.
I also have Grandparents. My Grandparents are Ron and Ruth, and Mike and Bobbie.
Well that is my family thanks for reading!!!
You have a very big family and i’m glad that you said their names instead of saying i have two aunts and that’s it.
Hello again,
I hope you had a good week. I hope you had a great ‘blogging’ week. Just to check are you prepared for the commenting game that will be coming up as part of the Student Challenge in a couple of weeks?
1. Have you at least 5 other student blogs linked on the sidebar of your blog; blogs from other students around the world, not just those in your class or school. I see you have done this.
2. Do you have a blogroll or link category called Global students or Global classes. I put a link about how to do this in my previous message. Great I see you have done this too.
So Ms. Wyatt’s essentials in a great post are below. I have added whether I think you have achieved this in your most recent post:
1. A catchy title – Use alliteration perhaps: My Fabulous Family, My Family are Fun.
2. At least one visual (with attribution) whether photo, cartoon, video or another web 2.0 tool like padlet or glogster. This would be good.
3. An interesting topic with your passion for the subject coming through. I can tell you care about your family.
4. A post that is well written and not copy/pasted from somewhere else. It could be a bit longer and tell me a bit more about your family.
5. A post has been proofread and spellchecked. Yes it is accurate.
6. One that is written in paragraphs – at least three of them. It is short so it is only about one paragraph long.
7. One that includes links to other websites on similar topics – at least two of these. Many students are not doing this. There is a good trick to get people to read more of your blog and to stay longer. You could say, and if you enjoyed this post by me, why not read … and leave a link to another post.
Ms.Wyatt says that if your post covers the seven things mentioned above e.g. has a catchy title, includes at least one visual etc. etc., it will be added to the flipboard magazine.
Could you make any changes so that it would score 7 out of 7?
When you have done that, Ms. Wyatt suggests you go to the blogging challenge and leave a comment on this post.
Here is the link to the post she is talking about: http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/04/23/week-6-what-to-write-about/
Just to remind you she asks that you ‘mention what topic you wrote about and leave a link to your post’….not a link to your blog but to the post.
I would also make clear that this post is not ‘other homework’ but a response to the Student Blogging Challenge by adding the hashtag
#stubc17 Week 6 to the title.
Hope you find this helpful. With every good wish
Merry Beau
Thank you for visiting our blog Ashton. I bet you are glad that the exams are over.
I hope you enjoy Games Week on the Student Blogging Challenge. https://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/05/07/week-8-games-and-more-games/
Week 8! Just two more challenge weeks after this.
Don’t forget to reply to the comments your visitors leave.
With every good wish
Merry Beau
I am really looking forward to what you write for this week’s challenge;
The 9th week of the Student Blogging Challenge
Write the very best post you can for your teachers and visitors to read.
You can read more about what Ms.Wyatt wants you to do here:
http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/05/14/week-9-have-i-improved/
Good luck 🙂
Hi there,
Hope you are getting on well with your best ever post. I look forward to reading it. Be sure to reply to those who comment on your blog 🙂
With every good wish
Merry Beau
As the Student Blogging Challenge ends, goodbye from me in Ireland and the best of luck to you in the future,
With every good wish,
Merry Beau