The Most Perfect Day

I would describe the best day ever by waking up and looking outside and there is a bunch of snow on the ground to play in and to make forts. But then I see that someone is standing in my room and this is  someone I have never seen before. Some one not normal but then they start to say. You have just one a trip around they world to have the best day you have ever had.  I think to my self why me and why me now this is very strange.  Me not exactly knowing what I am about to do I hop straight out of bed and say OK.  I get  my pants own and my sweater on and walk out of my room.  The perpetual person follows right behind me like hes my dog. I Sit at the table to get my breakfast and then this person stops me to say that i will be eating on the plane and I stop to think. A PLANE this is crazy so then I hop out of my chair and go to get my snow boots with excitement.  Then I think what if my mom will not let me go so I run to my moms room and wake her up. Tell her that I will be going to school now bye and then I run out the door and in to the plane. On the plane I got served eggs bacon and toast and that was the best meal that I ever had. Then we went to every store in the world and I could get what ever I want and as much as I want. It was amazing the best thing  ever.  Then we did some other things that I am not aloud to tell you because it was with the secret agencies. After that we went home to my beautiful NEW  house that was 59 times my other house.When I  walked in it  was magical it was like walking in a candy factory.This was the time when the day had to end and the guy went home and I jumped in to my new bed and had the best sleep of my hole life.

3 comments

  1. zitoubb · November 15, 2017 at 6:06 pm ·

    I like that you started it by saying you wake up. I wish you told us what you got at the stores and does a car count? I wonder how much it cost to get everything u wanted. Come visit my blog please http://blog.elanco.org/zitoubb/.

  2. viam946 · November 15, 2017 at 6:20 pm ·

    I really liked how you put it in your point of view like it was happening. I wish you put more details about what the guy was like that gave you the trip. I wonder what places in the world you went and where in the places?

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  3. Georgia · November 18, 2017 at 8:07 am ·

    Hi Annabel,
    My name is Georgia and I live in South Australia. Your perfect day sounds awesome! I liked how you said that you couldn’t tell me what you did with the secret agencies. That made me want to read more! Next time you could re-read what you wrote and correct a few spelling and grammar mistakes. come and visit my blog and read my perfect day!
    http://georgiaw617.edublogs.org/
    from Georgia.