The perfect day would be to go out to target and Walmart. Buy every Nerf gun thereafter we would go to taco bell and eat there. Than have a bunch of friends come over to my house and have big Nerf war that would last 2-3 hours. And be able to go see a bunch of different games for the Xbox. Get a new Xbox so me and my brother could play together on some games. Also I would want the Nintendo switch. I wish this would happen on the day before Christmas. So than I would be able to see my family members and show them what I got for the perfect day. So than maybe they would want to have another big Nerf war. Than we would have chick fil a for lunch and that would be the perfect day.
By Riley.C.Jones
I like that your perfect day is about Nerf guns. I wish that you would of put the events like when u get the Nintendo switch and Xbox that you got the at the same time. Why didn’t you say it was on the day before Christmas? http://blog.elanco.org/zitoubb/
thanks for reading my store maybe I will make a part 2 with your ideas in it like when did I get they Xbox and switch and what event’s I did with the Nerf guns thanks.
i like that you want toco bell and abot nefe fight i wish you can have more nefe fights and have and go to wallmart. why do you like to wallmart and have nefe fights?
I really like how you took about nerf fights
I wish you would tell me more about the nerf fights and the devices you used.
I wonder if you are going to make another story about nerf fights.
Hello Riley, I am Lily and I have come to your blog to see your post. I am from Wilderness School in Australia. I really enjoyed reading about Your perfect day. Your Perfect day is similar to what mine would be as I have a Xbox and a Nintendo switch which I got for my birthday and I love playing. I am writing a post on my blog about my perfect day and if you could go and check it out, that would be great.
My Blog: http://lilyw617.edublogs.org/
Thanks Lily.
Hi Riley,
My name is Sorcha, I’m a year 6 student at a school in Adelaide, Australia, our teacher has got us to comment on your classes blog. I notice you love having big Nerf wars and playing on the Xbox, I wonder if you will post any more things about it. Come visit my blog http://sorchaw617.edublogs.org/.
From Sorcha
I like how you talk about taco bell
I wish you told me the nerf gun you would of used.
I wonder how much money that all would cost.
Hello Riley,
My name is Emily, I am in Year 6 at Wilderness School in Australia!
I have read your “Perfect Day Post” , and mine would be very similar!
I love going to Target, and having a good nerf fight!
I was just wondering, what would you do for the perfect sleepover?
On my blog I am going to be doing a similar post soon.
Here is the link if you want to come visit: http://emilyw617.edublogs.org/
Speak soon!
Emily c:
Hi Riley,
My name is Zach I really liked how you gave us a lot of information what you would do. Another is I really like that you planned everything out ,and that is something that I like. I wish you change “thereafter” to then we or after that. I wonder how many people would you invite for the nerf gun war? But other wise I really liked your story.
From,
Zach Delgado
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And see my other blog zach1019.edublogs.org