I want to build steel construction because my dad works for a steel construction company. So if i do work for steel construction my dad can teach me how to build steel buildings.I also pick steel because i think that it would be fun because i like to build stuff like that.I like to build stuff so i think that this job is good for me.I like this job because you are high up in the air and i like to be up high.
building things with steel sounds fun.Your punctuation,grammer, and spelling is good
Capitalize I by itself and don’t use as much I’s in your writing
I like your job cause I like building things to. Your punctuation is good. Your grammar is good to. And your spelling is good also.
Your I’s need to be capitly.
I liked how you added some detail but the way you can make it better is star,wish,wonder.I wish you would have just a little more detail. I love how you added at least some detail and wonder,I wonder if you would be able to do that.
I like how you explained how you want to be a steel constructor. I wonder what it would be like to be a steel constructor. I wish you could capitalise your I’s.
I wish that you can tell me that who are you going to be when I read it I really don’t know what your career is