Who is your hero? Why is he/she your hero and how can you be more like that person?
My pop-pop was is the army.He served for are freedom.I want to be in the army. I want to fight for are freedom.
My brother want to be in the army to.
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I liked how you wrote about the army. I wish you wrote more!!!!!!! why didn’t you put spaces after your periods.
Hi Austin, I’m Alessia and I am from Wilderness school in South Australia and my dog is also called Austin! I really notice how you value so much about your Grandad beng in the army. I also really value how much you want to make a difference as well just like your Grandad! If you have time I would love it if you could check out my blog, my link is bellow! Great job Austin!
Alessia
http://alessiaw617.edublogs.org/
HI Austin!!
My name is Lauren! I’m from a school in Australia,South Australia called Wilderness, I’m in Year SIX! My Teacher has talked to your teacher about joining to do Who is your hero or Your Perfect Day! I will be doing the same task as you!
I noticed how you used paragraphs
I wonder if you could just relook your spelling and grammar! Then your post will be much better!
Please contact me via email!
My email is: lseeto@student.wilderness.com.au
Please also check my blog!
My Blog URL is: http://laurensw617.edublogs.org/
Thanks
Lauren S
Hi my name is Charlie, I’m 11 years old and in year 6, I am from Wilderness School Adelaide. Our classes have been buddied up to check out each other’s blog. Please come and check out my blog or email me at: http://charliew617.edublogs.org/ or email cbower@student.wilderness.com.au I really like how you want to help us and serve for our country it is a very brave thing to do. Maybe to improve your blog you could check your spelling and grammar, Good Job!
Thanks
From Charlie