Hi, I’m Rachel and I am going to tell you a time that I won something. First one day my dad showed me a magazine. it was about the New Holland fair. in the magazine, there was something about a baking contest…I said yes! Next, A few weeks later, we started looking for recipes and we fond one We changed it a little bit and we were finally done. We handed it in… Last, it was the day of the fair. I was soooo excited to see my results. We went into the building. We found my brownies… WE GOT FIRST PLACE!! After we saw the results we walked around the fair and then we went back to the building that had the brownies and we got the check which was $20.00. As you can see, the time that I won was awesome.
I really liked how you put a lot of detail in it!
I wish you told me when it was and where it was.
I wonder how many people were there and if you did it by yourself?
well it was at the new hollond fair, I don’t know what bilding it was in, I don’t know how many people there was, and I did it all by my self with a little bit of help from my dad.
i really liked how you desribed what faire.I wish you told me more about what kind of brownies.I wonder why you did not tell me about what biulding you were in?
star:I love how you were so happy about it!
wish:I wish you would have said what you did at the fair?
wonder: I wonder how you made the brownies?