The Titanic sinking
By: mckayla barba
On april 10 1912 me and my family was going on a boat called TITANIC I looked at the boat the “guy who created the titanic said the boat is 269.1 metres-the length of the titanic (882 feet 9 inches)”. Then we went on the boat and got settled in our room and put stuff were the stuff belonged and then we went to dinner and the” guy said more 825 tons-the amount of coal used per day”.”Then he also said that there are 2,223 on board.He also said the Titanic can hold 3,547 people”, then I said thanks for the facts.
For food there were 40,000 of fresh eggs for 2,223 on board.Then the lifeboats the titanic can hold 20 lifeboats.Then “he said it would cost 6,000 dollars”.Then I was outside and then I felt a BANG and we crashed right into a huge piece of iceberg .Then the titanic split in half the other half sink here were a bunch of people on the other side.
Then the other side sinked into the ocean.I lifeboat came and I got on it and they handed me a blanket then we go to a bigger ship and then it took me to my house.On the titanic only 31.6% people survive but that’s what we heard from the news,and I was one of them because I went quickly on to one of the lifeboats.
The End
I love your Titanic story
That is an awesome story and you are awesome Mckayla
I love your Titanic story!!!!!!!!!!!
I like how you said that you heard a bang because so we know you bumped into something I wish you put a little more facts in your story and I wounder if you were be able to catch up to the boat or you had to swim