Today we did a math test and later I did football and I got 1 touchdown the score was 14-21, we lost. For lunch I had a sandwich and some apples, later we had stem we are learning about touch and are senses it was interesting, later we did school work, later tonight I’m doing nothing.
Cool, Trenton! It sounds like an overall good day. I like how you gave us some details about the football game. I wish you could choose one detail about your day and really dive into it. For example, choose to write about football and then give us ALL the details about your touchdown, the other team, how you felt, etc.
Nice Trenton. It looks like your having a good day. I like how you explained how your day was going so far and that you got a touchdown. I wish though you explained if the math test was easy,hard, or in the middle. Good story though.