Once upon a time it was my birthday. My name is Emily and today I am 8 .
Then late in the afternoon like at 6:00 She rectified a package it said To Twixy from you know who. She was confused because I did not know who it was from.It could be from ashlen,Katty,or Rachel.
So then I asked my mom,What should I do with this egg?Of course she said keep it.It was glowing so much and making too much noies I got tired of it.
So at like 12:30 at night I climbed out of my bedroom window and went.I went to glacier creek valley and In the lake I grabbed the egg and right after I grabbed it it cracked!So
So then I took the egg shell and laid it inside and dropped it in the river.Then I fell in.The little critter puffed up into like this raft and I climbed on it.Then after We got to shore I said to myself I guess it isn’t that bad I will name it sofi.
So we went home and after that My mom said “Do you still want it”?I said yes so I trained it and lived happily ever after.So then I took it inside Made it a bed and habbitat we loved him.At first I guess I did not Know how good I had it.
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Thanks for commenting.But can you make your URL so I can come strait to your blog?
i like that you added a lot of details and i wish you would of said where the egg came from. did it come from the package? and i wounder what did the critter look like? what color was it? was it an actual animal? and please come visit my blog. http://blog.elanco.org/Kauffm563