6 thoughts on “High School Reality Part 2

  1. Hello again Milani,

    I hope you had a good week. I hope you had a great ‘blogging’ week. Just to check are you prepared for the commenting game that will be coming up as part of the Student Challenge in a couple of weeks?
    1. Have you at least 5 other student blogs linked on the sidebar of your blog; blogs from other students around the world, not just those in your class or school.
    2. Do you have a blogroll or link category called Global students or Global classes. I put a link about how to do this in my previous message.

    So Ms. Wyatt’s essentials in a great post are below. I have added whether I think you have achieved this in your most recent post:
    1. A catchy title – Yes the title is catchy
    2. At least one visual (with attribution) whether photo, cartoon, video or another web 2.0 tool like padlet or glogster. I liked your use of Google Slides, however have you attributed the source of the pictures used?
    3. An interesting topic with your passion for the subject coming through – I read this on Brooklynn’s blog. Perhaps you are collaborating. As I discovered it is inspired by ‘Smile’ by Raina Telgemeier.
    4. A post that is well written and not copy/pasted from somewhere else.
    5. A post has been proofread and spellchecked
    6. One that is written in paragraphs – at least three of them. Google Slides breaks the story up nicely.
    7. One that includes links to other websites on similar topics – at least two of these. Perhaps you could add a link to ‘Smile’ by Raina Telgemeier or Part 1 of High School Reality.

    Ms.Wyatt says that if your post covers the seven things mentioned above e.g. has a catchy title, includes at least one visual etc. etc., it will be added to the flipboard magazine.

    However this seems to be more homework – a response to a book you are reading in class, rather than a post about something where your passion for the subject shines through.

    Perhaps next week you could make clear that this post is not ‘other homework’ but a response to the Student Blogging Challenge by adding the hashtag
    #stubc17 Week 6 to the title.

    Hope you find this helpful. With every good wish
    Merry Beau

  2. Hi Milani,
    Hope you are getting on well with your best ever post. I look forward to reading it. Be sure to reply to those who comment on your blog 🙂
    With every good wish
    Merry Beau

  3. As the Student Blogging Challenge ends, goodbye from me in Ireland and the best of luck to you in the future,
    With every good wish,
    Merry Beau

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