Cinquains
kittens
fluffy, furry
loses a lot of fur
orange, white, soft, green eyes, awesome
Hunter
fried eggs
inside yellow yolk
outside white, gooey, yum
amazing for breakfast, good with toast
delicious
kittens
fluffy, furry
loses a lot of fur
orange, white, soft, green eyes, awesome
Hunter
fried eggs
inside yellow yolk
outside white, gooey, yum
amazing for breakfast, good with toast
delicious
Hi Maggie! I really enjoyed reading your cinquains. But in the first one I don’t know if you should write “kittens” because you are only talking about one kitten. And in the second one this was your syllable pattern: instead of:
2 2
5 4
6 6
9 8
3 2
Maybe you could do this instead:
fried eggs
inside is yolk
outside white, gooey, yum
awesome for breakfast, good with toast
so good
Are fried eggs your favorite thing to eat for breakfast?
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Dear Summer,
I will try to change the kitten mistake. Also in the second cinquain I will try to use you ideas but not copy them. When you wrote the syllable pattern the first one is what I did and the second one is what it should be right?
Thanks for commenting.
Dear Summer,
Fried eggs are one of my favorite foods for breakfast. I think I have to many favorites.