fluffy, furry

                                                 loses a lot of fur

                                orange, white, soft, green eyes, awesome



                                                      fried eggs

                                                  inside yellow yolk

                                       outside white, gooey, yum

                              amazing for breakfast, good with toast



  1. Hi Maggie! I really enjoyed reading your cinquains. But in the first one I don’t know if you should write “kittens” because you are only talking about one kitten. And in the second one this was your syllable pattern: instead of:
    2 2
    5 4
    6 6
    9 8
    3 2
    Maybe you could do this instead:
    fried eggs
    inside is yolk
    outside white, gooey, yum
    awesome for breakfast, good with toast
    so good
    Are fried eggs your favorite thing to eat for breakfast?
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    Have a great day! 🙂

    • Dear Summer,
      I will try to change the kitten mistake. Also in the second cinquain I will try to use you ideas but not copy them. When you wrote the syllable pattern the first one is what I did and the second one is what it should be right?
      Thanks for commenting.

    • Dear Summer,
      Fried eggs are one of my favorite foods for breakfast. I think I have to many favorites.

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