World famous super power!!!

“Screech!!!” ” The bus I’m late!” Hi, my name is Jordan culbert and this is just another one of those regular school days that are so boring. You know what, it’s a Monday and if you ever read one of my other blog post, you would know I hate Mondays. So I missed the bus, great how can this day get any worse. I wish it was thursday right now, because thursdays are the best. ” Jordan you missed the bus!!!” said my mom. ” I know that allretty!” “Do you want me to take you?” she said. “Nah,” I will walk to school. I ran down stairs and took a granola bar, then bolted outside. Of course I trip because it’s a monday and now I have a bloody forehead.  So I ran back got a bandage and I’m about to be late! One of my favorite things to do is jump and you know that song I just want to Jump, Jump!!! So I decided to jump, I closed my eyes because it feels like I’m flying and BOOM! I expected to come back to the growed, but I was soaring thru the sky. At first you would think I was flying, but I’m not so I began to fall and yay, I thought I was dead. But as soon as I hit the ground, I went in the air again.  I thought this was the coolest thing ever. So I got to school right on time because I bounced over all the houses. THE END!!!            That’s all folks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 

4 responses

  1. I love that you added yourself to the story and you related it to something you like. I wish you would have added more detail to the super power though. Great job!!

  2. You did a great job Jordan I really like it with that superpower you’d never be late. I wish you’d keep on explaining about your superpower. But another than that you did a great job.

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