Flying Pigs
By me(Sarah) and him(jacob)
Once upon a time there were two not very smart pigs Bob and Bobette. They were brother and sister. They had beautiful white feathery wings with diamonds in them. They did not know what they were for because they were not smart. Then one day they started to flap their wings that is when they found out. Then when the pigs started to fly the wings took control and started to fly them around the world.
A few milliseconds later Bob said “This has been forever.”
Then Bobette said “Dude! Were two inches off the ground.”
“Ohhhhhh” Sighed Bob.
“be quiet”said Bobette.
“Whatever,” whined Bob.
When they passed through town something magical happened everyone that said when pigs fly regretted what they said.
One guy said ”I’ll give you a million dollars when pigs fly”
Then woosh one lucky guy got one million dollars,and one guy was flat out broke.
“Where do you think these wings are taking us”pondered Bobette.
“I don’t know, but I sure do hope that it is a nice place,” wondered Bob.
A few hours later they went down to the ground so that they could get something to eat. Then they dropped to the right by a pile of apples. They grabbed a few apples, and ate them. As soon as they were done the wings imeaditly started to fly. Then they hit a bar on the Eiffel tower. Then they flew all the way to the top of the Eiffel tower and looked down.
“I don’t want to go down that, it’s too high for me,” thought Bob
Then back when they were flying they saw some wildlife. There were deer, birds, squirrels, and many other animals. They thought that they should stop and say hello to all the animals. They came close to the ground and all the animals ran away.
“Why did they all run away from us,” wondered Bob.
“I don’t know, they must have been scared of us,” explained Bobette
They automatically started to fly again then. They went up so high that they could see miles from where they were. They flew until it was dark. Then they found a place in the woods that they could stay at. They set up and went to bed.
The next morning they found some shrubs and ate them. That filled them up. Then a few minutes later they saw a few children playing in their backyard. Bob and Bobette thought that they should go and play with them. But when they got close the the children, they ran away.
Then they went back into the air. Then they felt hungry as soon as they had gotten back into the air. So immediately they ate and went back home!
March 2, 2016 at 12:39 am
Dear Jacob,
that story was great! I loved reading it because it was easy to picture every thing you wrote. It was a cute story and I’m looking forward to more great and magical, cute stories. Keep blogging blogger!
Howdy,
Katie
March 2, 2016 at 3:01 pm
Hi Katie May Olsen,
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March 4, 2016 at 2:09 pm
Hi Jake I really liked your post because Bob and Bobette flew around places with a flying pig.I wish I could f;y then I could go anywhere I want.I wonder why you did flying pigs?
March 4, 2016 at 2:32 pm
I like the way you ended the story. I wish you would have added more detail to the story. Why did you decide to write about flying pigs?
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March 9, 2016 at 2:55 pm
Hi Martin,
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March 8, 2016 at 8:57 pm
I like the story about the pig and the ending to.
March 9, 2016 at 2:45 pm
Hi Ivan,
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