1st person and 3rd person

Story #1 (1st Person): I went to the camper and I had a fantastic day! First, I went to the lake close by there. Next, I colored with my coloring stuff. Also, I played tag with my brother there. Finally, I went out to eat supper at my favorite restaurant Mcdonalds. As you can see, I had a fantastic day at the camper!

 

Story #2 (3rd Person):  Alyssa went to the camper and she had a fantastic day there! First, she went to the lake close by there. Next, Alyssa colored with her coloring stuff. Also, she played tag with her brother. Finally, she went to her favorite restaurant Mcdonalds. As you can see, Alyssa had a fantastic day at her camper.

2 Replies to “1st person and 3rd person”

  1. Hi Alyssa, it’s Caden and I really like how you did two different stories. I wish that you told more about your day. I wonder if you will make another story like this. Come to check out my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/zook2d3/ Thanks

  2. Hey Alyssa, it’s Cadena and I really like how you made it in two different perspectives. I wonder how you went Mcdonalds because there is no Mcdonalds up there. I wish you added more to the first person story like your thoughts. Come check out my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/zook2d3/ Thanks

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