A good comment there is a good tip for this there is something called “Star, Wish, Wonder” In my classroom that what we use here I’ll tell you about it. Star tell the person a good thing they did with there story/author everyone likes a compliment on there post. Wish tell them what you wish they did better no necessarily a bad thing but what you wish they did or what you could have done. And Last but not least wonder ask a question of what they are going to good or if they are going to do that when they get older or something like that. That is my good comment tips to use if you need to make a super, awesome, mega comment.

Hi My Name Is Joseph or Joey I mostly like to be called Joey.                                                                                                                                  I live In Pennsylvania and I play 2 different sports Basketball and Football I like these two sports a lot. Also I have a huge family (they love me with all there hearts). I have a dog named Remi he is almost a year old in 3 months, I also have a sister named Emily and Emily and I love each other with all our hearts we are just a big huge family waiting for new stuff to do and see and make life useful on earth.

Ryan:Regular                                            Joey:Italics

What kind of person do you think Maniac Magee is? Would you want him for a friend and why?Why do you suppose Amanda laughed so hard and began to  lose her balance when Jeffrey asked her if she was running away? (pg. 11) Why do you think he was puzzled by her reaction?  

I think Maniac Magee is a mysterious person because he runs everywhere and normally does not talk to people and does crazy things like end Mcnabb’s strikeout record and throw a football with one hand and punt it very far. I would want him as a friend because he is very good at things and I would want to know him and help him find a home and give him food. It would be fun to do fun things with him as well.

I think Amanda laughed so hard because no one ever asks her if she is running away because everyone who talks to her goes to school and does not ask that. Maniac was puzzled by her reaction because he doesn’t expect someone to do that because everyone he talks to are running as well.

Also Maniac magee is sort of a good person because he a nice kid and he is a gentleman and he does lots of good stuff except runs away when something happens but hopefully Maniac’s life gets better for him and lets put  “Hopefully” in quotes you never know what twist and turns could be in Maniac’s life.

Tyler Ma: regular        Jo ey: italic

Favorite Memory

My partner’s favorite memory was when hewent to Knoebels. He said it was the time of his life. If you ever went there you would know how amazing it is. I mean you go on rides, you eat popcorn and all this junk food. It’s   the time of your life!!! He went on like 10,000 rides.Like salt and pepper shaker, the revolver, and the shacker. So I strongly encourage to go to Knoebels. You can tell that Joey had a blast. So you can go there and have a blast too.  

My Partner’s favorite memory is when he won the Basketball Championship he scored 12 and he got 1 buzzer beater. Also he was pumped and Hyped for his basketball game he was ready for it any day and time.  Also he’s team won 52 to 30 they dominated by 22. As you can see he did a really good job. Also after that they had a Pizza party, and the Pizza was from Pizza Hut. Then after that he had a fun practice and he liked it a lot and I mean A lot!    

There you have it. The best memories ever with Joey and Tyler Ma. You should read more of our memories. Well if we had some more stories. So that just proves how awesome Knoebels and playing basketball.

“Chop”! 100 fishes gone. But wait I’m not that kind of shark I, a friendly shark but sadly no one believe me so I ave to prove it to them so I try to get close to them that doesn’t work I try to clean there poop up that doesn’t work. Then

I would rather go skydiving because it sounds more exiting and more fun. Skydiving would be more fun because it would get your heart beating a mile a minute and it will get adrenaline rushing through your body. Also my aunt would like to do something like this with me because she loves roller coasters (which is the same thing) you could name a roller coaster and my aunt has problem been on it. Skydiving could also be good for you because it could give off stress lets say you really wanted to go skydiving and you jump if your stressed you’ll feed a lot better because you would feel like your a bird up in the air flying and you as a person will feel like you are flying. Another thing you can do is bring some friends along to comfort you so you wont feel scared because you are doing it with your friends and your friends will problem be as scared as you but when you land on the ground you know you had a safe trip. So  you are thinking “Joey your crazy who would go skydiving well pro skydiving with random peoples, Animals and maybe kids.

If I a animal in the zoo I would be a tiger I would be a tiger.I would be a tiger because they are luck because they get to be looked at all day. Plus they are so cute when they are little. If you go to the zoo they are active but they are can be boring some times. If  I was in the cage I would get so bored if it was my first week it would be fun.

If I was a animal I would be a Gorilla I would be A gorilla Because if I was a gorilla (Like Ivan) I could hopefully not be in captivity and I would have a cool Gorilla  family and I would also be able to be free and roam the forest and also have all sorts of cool animal friends but one thing that is awesome is that the gorilla is almost the highest in the food chain so the gorilla but if I was a gorilla I would be mostly a vegetarian.             

If people keep on watching me as a pet gorilla I would probably I would like it but after a while I would like to be free because who’s going to want to stay in captivity for their whole life if you’re an animal.

Cole: Regular Joey: Italics

What Would Happen Without The Voting System?

Have you ever thought of not having a voting system? It would be crazy right? Well me and Cole are going to explain what and some things that would happen if we didn’t have a Voting System well basicly the world would have lots of presidents and we would not have no one that is in control and no one will have someone to listen to do do something and also we wouldn’t have a government. Also we could vote for a judge’s,president,governor’s. The world be crazy.

If we didn’t have a voting system people would by telling what to do because they will think that they are the boss. People could be adding law because people have to vote to the law become.
Also If we didn’t have a voting system we would be all of the place with our government and no one would know what to do and that would be bad because everyone would go crazy

“Blizzard, Blizzard stay indoors!” Said me the weather man as you can tell right now there is a huge blizzard going on and I’m trying to report each juicy story going on right now i’m on the roof broadcasting how much snow there is and right now there is about 11 in. of snow I said to the broadcast and really all I was doing was reporting how much the blizzard snow was racking up in different cities and then I was talking about what rads were closed, and were there any accidents, and what schools are closed ” hopefully all of them!” and by the time I said that the snow had just got to 1 ft., 6 inches ” the kids were exited to play in the snow” I said ” But the adults weren’t because in the back of all the adults minds they knew that after the snow ends they would have to shovel.”and I ended my broadcast with goodbyes and suddenly the power went out I went up on the roof that were the satellite is and the satellite was covered in snow and the satellite almost 2 and a half feet so I had to clear off all the snow  plug back in the satellite went to go live and tell them what happen and what is coming I left them with a cliff hanger far a minute and told the that the snow should end at 7 p.m. but some cities are going to last till Sunday and the  I said get ready adults around Lancaster because you would with you would have a snow blower and nothing else because right now in some ares these a good 2 1/2 to 3 feet of snow. That it from Joey and I hope you enjoyed the news and weather enjoy people of Lancaster.

How to Become a United States Presidential Candidate.

Joey:Blue

Adam:Purple

Do you want to know how to become the United States Presidential Candidate? Then this is the place for you to  read we will be summarizing  how to become a united states Presidential Candidates. How you become the presidential candidate is not to easy so that is why we are explaining it to you. HERE WE GO!!!!

So here is the first place you start when you are becoming a presidential candidate. To serve as presidential candidate you must be a natural born citizen. That means they would have to be born in the United States of America or they could of been born in another country, but they have to live in the United States of America for 14 years.
It is important to have a democratic or republican party, or a good party. It is very difficult to not have a good party and be the United State Presidential Candidate. Every state holds a national convention every year. Delegate attend this convention.