The Message
This concept is based on a daughter and a dad messaging together. By: Josh and Jace
Daughter’s Dad’s
side side
“Hey.”
“Hey.”
I feel weird.
idk why though.
Why has mom not been
at our house for awhile? “Problems Honey.”
Ok.
Me and mom have
Have been getting
In fights.
OMG!
What?
There is a girl watching me
But she does not see.
Stay calm!
I Don’t see her
Anymore.
OMG She’s
Banging on
The door!
Dont answer.
I know.
Someone just texted
Me.
Dont answer
Whatever you
Do!
Why!
Because i know
Who this is
Who?
Nothing.
Why can’t you
Tell me?
None of your
Business.
Whatever, i’m shaking.
The girl keeps texting me!
Don’t
Answer.
You know what i am, because
You’re doing nothing.
____________________________________________________
THE RANDOM GIRL
Hey!
I know what
What you
Like.
What!
Pugs are Your
Favorite dog.
How did you know
That!
I know all about
You!
I like taylor
Swift too.
How?
Stop talking to me!
I’M Coming!
Where?!
In your house!
Please don’t.
Just to hang out.
Im calling the
Cops right now
They said they will
Be here in 5 minutes.
I have 5 minutes
To hang out
With you
Let’s play hide
And seek!
OK your not coming in.
I know your
Favorite spot!
Then i will go
Somewhere else. i know were you
Are gonna go.
We’re not going to play.
You’re funny!
We’re
Playing!
I’m coming!
No!
____________________________________________________
Dad
Hey i’m back!
Good!
Not really she’s about
To come in.
I left work i’m
Coming.
I still wonder about
Mom.
We have to
worry about this.
Ok.
What did she say?
She knows all
About me.
Yep.
How do you
Know?
I have to tell you.
What?
The girl your
Wondering about
Is your mom.
Ever since we broke
Up she wanted you
Not in a good way.
Omg.
She is screaming and
Trying to knock the
Door down!!!
Hide, now.
She knows my spot.
Don’t hide there
Then.
Just hide until the
Cops come.
They should come any
Second!
I’m hiding in where
We store our food
Up on the top shelf.
She is ringing the
Doorbell & yelling to
Come in.
OMG she just bust
In. I am about
To throw up. Stay calm
Whatever you
Do!!!
She just went down
Stairs where my spot is.
She is tearing everything
Down and crying & screaming.
You there?
YES!
She is in the kitchen right
Now she is breaking everything.
She’s coming in!!!!
She doesn’t see me,
She walked in looked
up at me
But did
not see me.
Should i get off of the shelves
I don’t know
I think she’s outside
I’m jumping down
Ok
I jumped
Oh nooooooo! she
Is right there, she got
me cornered!!
I’m in this small
Area it’s pitch
Black.
I’m in a car,
“Mom’s car.”
Do you know
Where she is
Taking you?
No
Look outside
The window.
I Can’t im in
The back.
Is it locked?
I don’t know.
Mom forgets to
Lock things.
OMG it’s unlocked!
I’m jumping out! Don’t make
It obvious
,
Ok!?
JUMP!!!!
Ok, I’m out.
I don’t think
She noticed. Good.
Wait… I think she
Is stopping.
To Be Continued…
WOW! that story was great! I was on the edge of my seat. KEep it up looking forward to more.
Eddie M. from Texas