My Career
By Cole.U
I what to be a plumber because I like to fix things and do stuff with water. And I like to help people and it will be a fun job. You can get your hands dirty. You can go to different houses. You will know how to fix something at your own house. And that means that you do not have to call a plumber.You have to be strong and you need to repair pipes or toilets.
Good story but maybe next time you could write down what tools you need
I think that you did great just try to make some of your sentences longer ,and add some more details. otherwise love it.
thank you i will try to do that
Good story but don’t put that much ands
Cole good story but don’t put so much ands like josh said
I like your idea for a job. There were a couple of spelling errors, though.
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