Once upon a time the was a boy named Metallic and he was dating a piece of paper named Patricia. They weren’t just dating they were soul mates and best friends. One day Metallic asked Patricia on a date to McDonald’s she said yes, so the next day they went to McDonald’s. They ordered 5,000 Big Mac’s and 50 chicken nuggets. Then when they were done eating the were 5,000 pounds heavier. When they got to their car they could not fit inside the car so they had to roll down the street. When they finally got home they could not fit in the door so they got ready to break down the house, there dad came out and started to sing wreaking ball by Katie Perry. And they Katie Perry came in there house with a real wreaking ball. Then they all went home and then Patricia started to hand out with a boy named Translucent. Then Metallic came in and saw her with Translucent then he got jealous and broke up with Patricia so he ripped her into pieces and kept her in a box. The next day Metallic was very lonely he did everything like he did as if Patricia was there but she kinda was there because Metallic carried the box with him everywhere he went. The next day Metallic realized he needed Patricia in his life so he got her out of the box and used gorilla glue to glue her back together and then the got back together and went to McDonald’s and he proposed to Patricia and she said yes. A couple months later they got married and had a wedding with everybody in there family and Patricia’s uncle was the preacher and they had 5 little pieces of paper and lived happily ever after.
aw this story was cute i loved it and i wish that Patricia did not hang out with a different boy because it made metallic mad it that made me sad.
I liked it! it was really funny.
Hi Sarina! It’s me Milani And I finally got the Patricia thing. Anyway, I loved this story! It’s really funny! Although, you had some spelling errors that I wish you’d fix like, when you said “there” I think you meant ” their”. But that’s okay. And. I wonder why Katy Perry came to their house?
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I liked your story and you had some spelling errors like when you said there but you meant their but that’s OK and why was Patricia a piece of paper? other than that is was probably the best story I’ve read so far!!!!
I really liked how Metallic put together Patricia again. I wish that you told us what the 5 pieces of paper where named. I wonder if Translucent felt when he found out that Patricia got ripped up by Metallic?
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Hi its Lila I really liked the story and how the person was dating a piece of paper. I wish you would’ve put a little more to what happened after they got married. I wonder if they ever had any other fights along with their marriage.