The time I won somethinge

It was a nice hot summer day and, are team was losing the first game in are tournament.

Then, the second game we lost.It was horrible and we know we were going to lose the last game.

After, that we went to are last game and’ it was neck to neck .Near the end of the game we got the last goal  and ‘ We Won!!  We were so happy we got the biggest water bottle and dumped it on are coach.

That was the time I won the First game in season because of teamwork.

 

 

 

 

 

 

7 thoughts on “The time I won somethinge

  1. I like how you you told me that you found the biggest water bottle and dumped it on your coach. I wish that you would have told me what you were playing and you told me more about what you were playing . I wonder how you lost your games except for one I wonder how you used teamwork.

  2. Star: I liked how you used some humor.
    Wish: I wish you gave more details about the first and second game.
    Wonder: I wonder what it would be like to feel like your not going to win and then you win

  3. I liked your deails
    I wish you put your teamates names.
    was Rachel one of your teamates and what sport were you playing?

  4. I really like how you put water on the coach.
    I wish you would’ve told me more about where it was.
    I wonder what happen after the game.

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