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Song-like Sonnet #STUBC17

on March 22, 2017

Picture from Pixabay.

Apple-House in the Desert

This image struck my imagination

So, I asked, “Is this a whole new nation?”

I never thought this thing could ever do

As I walked over, I tripped on my shoe

This sight made my wondrous eyes alert

There was an apple-house in the desert!

Ruby-red with a blueberry-blue door

What was it like inside?  How was the floor?

Who lived in this strange-looking apple house?

Was it nothing more than a kid’s play-house?

Maybe a worm found the best home ever

But, a worm wouldn’t live here, just never

This house makes my mind so very confused

That house looked so new, polished and unused

          Feel free to write your own poem about this odd picture I found in the comment section below!  If you don’t know how to comment on my blog yet, make sure you check out my Creatively Commenting page you can find it at the top of my Widget Sidebar.

Here is an excellent website for learning about different types of poems you could write.

#STUBC17


8 Responses to “Song-like Sonnet #STUBC17”

  1. eby41b says:

    I like your poem. I wish you would write it longer. I wonder who lives inside? Please come visit my blog and please leave a comment. Here is the link : http://blog.elanco.org/eby41b/ Bye

  2. Louis Online says:

    Dear Summer Online,
    I really like your poem I also love making poems.
    Last year in my school, I also made a poem called a baboon eating a rat, and it was funny.
    https://louisonlinep.edublogs.org/
    Here is my blog sadly I did not post the poem.
    Louis Online.

  3. deondray says:

    I really enjoyed your poem it was fun and your picture was interesting. When I was reading it I could tell you are really good at being able to rhyme and have flow. You should come look at the work on my page I know you’ll like it I recently wrote a poem on my blog http://deondrayd.edublogs.org/.

  4. Daisy says:

    Hi Summer,
    Fist of all I like your blog name. That is such a funny poem, I just love it! Keep up with the poems, you know what you can make daily poems short or long or once a week. Just love it!
    Bye!
    Daisy Online
    https://daisyonlinep.edublogs.org/

  5. Georgia says:

    Hi summer,
    I am Georgia and I’m from Adelaide Australia.
    I really love your poem. I can tell that you put a lot of effort into it and I would love to see another poem of yours!
    If you would like to visit my blog just click on this link below:
    http://georgiaw617.edublogs.org/
    From Georgia.

  6. Thanumi says:

    Hi Summer!
    It is Thanumi. I am extremely sorry for not visiting your blog for a long time. But now that I am free, I am back again! Wow! Your poems are always nice, creative and long! How much time did it take you to write it?

  7. Matilda says:

    Hi summer,
    My name is Matilda I and love your poem. It is really creative and different and very meaningful. I also love how you put that awesome photo of the apple house in the desert. Come and check out my blog at http://tildyw617.edublogs.org/
    Thanks,
    Matilda

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