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   stern338

   January 2, 2019 at 2:41 pm

   Hi, Courtney! My favorite lines are lines three and four because I thought they were very creative. Though I wish the rhyming words for the first, second, and fifth lines were more diverse so they didn’t all end in “time.” How long did it take you to write this?
   See you later,
   Summer
   P.S. It would be nice of you to please check out my thoughts (it’s worth it)… blog.elanco.org/stern338/
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   Maggie

   January 28, 2019 at 5:11 pm

   Hello Courtney!
   I think that this is a very creative poem. I wonder what kind of poem this is. I like how you created an image in my head. I wish that you had found a word besides time to use for the different endings. Please come and visit my blog at blog.elanco.org/davison503/! Thanks!!