Fighting big fires
One day there was 2 turtles and 2 giraffes and there names were max,bob,jeff,zane and they were best friends and when there was a fire they would fight the fire.one day there was a fire and not just any fire it was a wild fire so they could not fight this fire so they went to the planet gertols and asked all the gertols to come and help they said yes so all the gertols came and so her was 20 gertols and so they went home and got more gertols they got 10 more gertols.so they went to the fire and one gertol said oh” man we need more gertol sso they went to the gertol market and got all the gertols, then they got 30 more gertols, they went to the fire and said well that is enough gertols.so the gertols fight the wild fire…
The end.
I liked what you wrote about that was cool I saw that you said sso I think that you so. I wounder do any of your relives are firefighters?
I like the story. But I wish you told us what gertols are. I also wonder if you had a inspiration for the names in the story?
P.S. Use the talking marks.
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Hi Dimitri i like your blog. Your writing about fires is amazing
1) I like the way you used your punctuaction accauretly.
2) How did they go to the moon without you saying what they used to get there.
3) When you used punctuation you didn’t use a capital letter for the peoples names, or when you put a full stop but you forgot to put a capital letter after it.
hi this is Dimitri thanks for telling me i will fix it and thank you for visiting my blog.
Hi this is Ashley I like your story I wonder if you made the story up or if Samantha hoover made it up and I also wonder if it only took you one day to finish that story come to my blog please here it is http://blog.elanco.org/BairT90/